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by magentasouth

person emriel
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really do find myself enamored of your writing style... but the idea of anyone else with Voldemort other than Harry Q.Q

I guess the story is every bit of interesting. compared to your other three fics - this and perhaps the other 2 hermione/voldemort stories out rank your hplv ones in terms of torture and giving us that wonderful dark lord glory @.@ that voldemort has.

I mean, if you used this kind of setting on Harry... I'll prolly turn into a pile of goo.

Still, reading it is affecting me in a manner that, yes, I feel for Hermione and I wouldn't fault her for what is happening. And that I still love you for making Voldemort that evil~ wee

Q.Q i might not have the heart to finish the three stories tho. maybe when you finally finish them ~ ill go read all. i guess my preferences just changed too much that i don't like hglv without harry in it. *o*...

good job anyway *O*
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this so far, well everything but Ginny. I hate Ginny- I wana kick her right in the taco. I miss Voldy too perhaps if I stare at you adoringly you will bring him back? Anyway great job so far!
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the updates. Though somehow I still can't quite believe that Voldy is gone...
person rocmom1
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this. Couldn't stop. Read it in one go. Look forward to more.
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
On one side I'm a little of a Draco/Hermione shipper and kinda want Draco to fall for Hermione, or at least care for her as more than an object of 'power' and 'desirable' because the Dark Lord wanted her.

On the other hand I want Voldemort to come back, kill Draco and ravish Hermione, never letting his 'possession' go ever again.

What a dilemma. xD
Either way I really like the new chapter, evil/plotting/obsessive Draco is sexy(Though not as sexy as Voldemort) ;D

xoxo
Rei
person geofoe
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so well written and brillaintly sexy, only up to chapter 6 and I love it!
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Draco is pure Slytherin! He was really laying it on thick there too, wasn't he? Part of me wonders if he was working with that guy to trick Hermione into trusting him. Like, the guy was supposed to attack, and then Draco would save the day. He seemed pretty off kilter when Hermione killed him. Meh, I'm really bad at making predictions.

Man, Ginny is not very likable, is she? I really wanted to punch her in the boob. And Harry...Jesus man! You'd think after everything he went through to defeat Voldemort he'd have more of a back bone. Speaking of Voldemort...we will be seeing him again, won't we?

Thanks for the update!
person Fleur K.
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, so she is going to be staying with Malfoy! I had a feeling she would end up there eventually. It was interesting what Draco said about the cage, that seems like something that only Hermione and Voldemort would really know. I cannot wait to read more! I'm so anxious for Voldemort to return somehow :)
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how the plot is moving along. It would seem that Harry does realize that Ginny only wants to be Mrs. Potter and have his money. That Ron is just a leach, because of their friendship during school.

Draco also seems to be getting what he wants; though I'm still not sure what that is.

Hermoine (and I) still miss the Dark Lord; especially in bed! Does that make me as sick and wicked as she it? Oh, well *submissives do tend to like a STRONG Master*