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You've definitely created a "captive audience" in me. Can't wait for more.

Took me a while to read everything again, but I still love this story and yay, update :D

Ooh, I'm happy! This is def. good :D I wouldn't hesitate. My dreams are ALWAYS foggy and blurred, so I know that if I get an order from one I love while sleeping, I'll do it xD Poor Mione, she has no idea what to do xD

Oh my goodness! I am beyond happy that you were able to update. This chapter totally made my day! It was definitely worth waiting for. The dream sequence was very interesting and well done. I'm glad he finally contacted her in some way. I am very interested to know what is 'beyond the door'. I hope you are able to update soon, I am on the edge of my seat :)

Taking a break from obsessive reading to finally review.

Not sure how I got here, because honestly I never read anything with a Voldemort pairing ... but I'm glad I did. You've written him so terrifyingly. Yes, I know he's a "dark lord" and terrifying anyway, but often he appears almost clownish or charicaturish, if such a thing could be said about the most evil creature living. The idea that he is just in her head all the time, outrageously well done. It's gotten to the point that every time *you're* in her head, I read it flinching all the while, waiting for him to react to whatever it is she's thinking.

Her characterization is sometimes (in my view) off, just here in particular, as I don't quite get how she would have been so quick to demonstrate all those hexes, and particularly the second time on Lavender. I get how quickly she could 'fall' when it's her own physical sensations ruling her brain, but to torture someone else just to keep her wand intact feels like a bit too ... easy.

With all that, your writing is wonderful, really evocative, and I can feel that cage, the chill in the air, all of it. You really bring us into her head and we're just along for the ride.

Glad to have found this. Now back to catch up with the rest of it. Looking forward to wherever you take it, and her, and us ...

Whoa.

Slightly breathless here.

Not sure where I thought you were going to take this, but it's gone in so many different directions from where I'd imagined it might ... wow. Very well done, and this turn of events just has me on the edge of my seat.

We're still in her head all the way through, and as confused and intense a place as it is, we feel it all.

Very well written. Looking forward to the updates ...

Holy crap!! He managed to harm her in a DREAM? Well it obviously was NOT a dream but then what was it?? hmmm can't wait for the dark lord to return! And maybe the last part of the dream was his way of telling her she's pregnant?? With HIS child? So many questions running through my head! Can't wait for the next update!

Ohh...yeah for the update! I love all the plots and twists that are forming. Great job and I hope to see more soon.

Wow, I love this! I didn't sleep at all this night to read it and well... I want it to continue. Is it safe to say, that I am suspecting Voldy's return?

I enjoyed this one, even if I though Hermione's emotions were completely ooc after Tom died and even somewhat before then. I understand her getting attached, but I think she should have been more confused about his death than wishing Harry was dead instead. It just didn't ring organic. I'm very curious as to what Tom is up to, and I wonder if that has anything to do with Harry's new strange behavior.

This story hasn't been updated since March, but I hope you don't abandon it.