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This is amazing! It's completely different from other HG/V I have read!

I love a great dark Hermione story. and the fact that she's having to fight an inner battle is always good! please continue writting more!

WOW. Absolutely love this one. I haven't been to AFFnet in ages, so imagine my surprise when I found this little gem. So hot. I absolutely love the way you describe Voldemort. I am so sick of all the fluffy ones out there. Yours is deliciously evil, manipulative, intelligent, and sexy. XD

So ... now you know what's coming next: UPDATE, UPDATE, UUUUPPPPDAAAATE!!! *winks, while snickering evilly*

Since it's around 3 am, I don't have much sensible to review. Sorry. Just that I absolutely had to stay awake to finish reading what you had so far. Loved it.

xx Nerys

Interesting start, especially for a first fic. I really liked the details about the cage and how her daily needs were met because my first thought was bathroom! Snape's reaction to seeing her was spot on. I like how while Hermione wanted Harry, Ron isn't shown in a negative light. (Except for the vague comparison at the end of the chapter with her life in the cage.)

I would try to break up the paragraphs though because it was very difficult to read such long ones. Too much at once. :)

I don't usually read V/Hr, but I will check out your next update.

I find what I am about to say fairly disturbing. I think... I actually like this story.
While the thought of Lord Voldemort engaging in sexual acts repulses me to no end, there is a certain intriguing quality to this story. I find myself wanting to know what happens next. I generally despise any Het HP fanfics yet I read it regardless. I sincerely hope you update this story soon and often.

~nekluvshp

I love this story! but I think what would make this interesting and would add a bit more stress to poor lil' Hermione would be if Ol' Voldie got his old looks back. It would make for more internal conflict for Mione. but that's just a thought ya know.

Excellent so far. The way you give a look into Hermione's mind is great. And "her" view of Ron is exactly the thoughts I had when I discussed with my daughter my feeling that HG should not end up with RW. I wanted her with Harry also. Ginny is too pushy for me and I just wonder how well they would have gotten along if he was the loudmouth that her brother was. Some would see that as balance, but I see it as him being stifled and overtaken by her too strong personality. p

Hermione is worried about a contraceptive potion knowing that the muggles have a morning after pill when she should be looking into some medical (or potion) treatment for the ADHD that she is definitely exhibiting. It could get her killed or at the least is kind of disturbing and would cause one (if they were the dark lord) to question her brilliance. How did she get through anything in school when she is so scattered? p

Could it be possible that Severus was part of a test for HG to see if she would betray LV? I would hate to think that he had died. HG has certainly made her choice and I am not sure if I agree with her or not, but understand it. She has not gotten support from her "friends" ever, only provided them with support and assistance...she was the giver and they were the takers. And for LV to prey on her insecurities where Harry is concerned is a subtle way to turn her away from them. Looking forward to the next chapter. p

Yay Love this. please update soon. Though I wonder what was on that paper he killed those two men for. Hmmmm. Anyhow keep the Voldy love coming.