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by magentasouth

person DANI
schedule August 15, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Primero capítulos estaban buenos, Pero siento que con la muerte de Vordemos, Tú historia pierde fuerza. 

schedule March 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm so obsessed with this story - I found it on AO3 where it's not as updated as it is here (another reviewer lead me here). Please for the love of all that is holy please (I beg you) update one or both sites with chapter 18 as I'm going crazy (I have million different theories). Great job, hun!

person Hurricane_Bridgette
schedule March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh please.. please tell me there are chapters on a drive, in a document just *eaiting* to be posted? I adore the back stpri3d that are being hinted at. Draco has had Harry? Why does he need Harry and Draco's hair? Why are they both suddenly acting that way towards Granger? Which is sucpect due to them being the trio that was there. Did Voldermort do it all on purpose? I am thinking so. The making her think he forced her to kill his parents, beating her days before, turning his back... you write very well. Hope to read more from you. Thanks for sharing.
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So... I am fairly certain your stories have been abandoned. I mean, i hope they havent but you ladt update was like, over 2 years ago, so... Either way, i loved this story. Great job, amazing writing, and i wish the story had been completed. Thank you for what you did write. :)
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love it. update soon
person Sue Donym
schedule October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah maaaaan! What a place to end it! I hope you get back into writing; I'm sure I'm not the only one dying to see the resolution to some of your fantastic WIPs.
person barrette
schedule June 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is so intriguing! I hope you are going to continue it. I have no idea what is going to happen to Hermione now that Voldemort is gone. Amazingly, her world seems worse now that she's free, just as LV predicted. And what is up with the door?!! You have a talent for coming up with plot twists that are so inventive, unexpected and entirely believable. It's really been fun reading this story and I find myself entirely unable to imagine what will happen next. Thank you for sharing your creativity with your readers in this story. It's brilliant.
person Ceara
schedule May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey,um, I have a beef to pick with you! I have read this story maybe 5 times all the way through. Certain chunks, maybe more. I love it! I adore it! I am so horrified and enthralled by it! And I am SO mad you have not continued it. I have so many tricky theories about what's going to happen, or what could be going on... Your Voldemort is quite possibly my favorite of all the Dark Lords. And trust me, I have ferreted out every Tom Riddle/Lord Voldemort story on every fan fiction site I can find. He's just so... perfectly smug, and intelligent (and he knows it) and arrogant and charismatic. A true embodiment of Slytherin, not just a caricature of the qualities like so many. The characterization of Hermione is near spot on. Often, I find that she gets lost in the character of a captive/victim in similar stories. Yet you've managed to maintain her personality even as you dull it with isolation and fear. It's quite impressive. The pacing is masterful, the dialogue perfection, the suspense deadly... your story gives me chills, makes my jaw drop, has my stomach in knots, leaves me salivating and keeps me on my toes. Please, please finish it for me. Give me the answers to my many questions and desires!
person KENDAL
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story so far. I really hope you intend to finish it. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Hel'n
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Do you remember that time around about 2 years ago and someone said "well. You're publishing so many stories at a time, I hope you don't quit them like (insertnameofsomeonewho'sdonethattoo)" and you answered "Well that's never going to happen!"

... Yeah. Though I completely understand, still it's very disappointing. I was wondering if maybe you would be willing to post the ending of your stories? Because I'd really like to know how they end. This one and necessary sacrifices in particular.