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for Crimes of Passion

by Lomonaaeren

person Black Padfoot
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I was just thinking it might've had something to do with him! Please update again soon, I'm loving this story! =)
person polka dot
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kinda guessed that one since there really isn't anyone else Draco cares about. I wonder was Voldemort reincarnated in scorpious. That would be cool.
person Kari
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Crap on a stick! I knew it had to do with Scorpius. Now it'll be interesting to know if he's crazy all on his own, having been born with some kind of evil darkness inside, or if there's some kind of evil being/person inhabiting his body.

In any case, awesomely nervewracking story. Though I'm not sure about if I should be annoyed with Ron and Hermione for bitching at Draco because he eventually ended up believing that Harry had tortured those youngsters. (He did confess to it and did all he could to look guilty in Draco's eyes! Kind of hard to argue against that.)
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha! I knew it!
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 4:

Gah! I had a feeling it was Scorpius! What else would destroy Draco? For all of that it's still horrible to read.
person Morri
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter when I realised that Scorpious may be the culprit.

I am happy that I was right. You wrote it brilliant as ever but...call me crazy...there was something in the way you had let Draco think that Scorpius was too much like Lucius, that made me a bit on the edge.

The way the son flaunted around the father, asking questions..so I went to the last chapter without reading the others..which I will now...and I just hope that both(Harry/Draco) get back together.

I fear that Scorpius may have something very...snakelike..like a certain Lord..but I hope that is not the case.
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God......I cannot wait for the next part!!!
person Myniephoenix
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!!!! I love you. <3
keep up the excellent work.
person W
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*faints*

Oh god, I really wasn't expecting this one! I'm just so curious, what's Draco going to do, how's Harry going to react and, more importantly, WHY DID SCORPIUS DO THAT?!?!?! It just smells of more secrets *sniffs excitedly*
And am I the only one who thinks that the letter sounded kind of fishy??

Can't wait for the next chapter! Brilliant dramaturgy (I hope that was the correct word... I just hate it when I'm being reminded that english isn't my mother tongue...), but the cliffy was mean...
person Ariathel
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far, can't wait for you to update it!