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by nekluvshp

schedule April 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh this was just amazing!

person Guess who
schedule August 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

HAHAHAHAHAH I CAN IMAGINE HOW HARRY LOOKED THERE XD

First time, I found this in FFnet and found the sex scenes deleted. Goddamnit, this was good!

schedule April 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this was epic... you should do a squeal with harry and draco...or one with severus and sirius pregnant.
schedule April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg I LOVE THIS!!!
person Jasmine
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story line. Locking Snape and Black in together and letting the story come from that scene. Brilliant! I also liked the points that made them more caring towards each other, Snape 'blushing' so adorable!
person ChaosLady
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my ass off with this story. Even the sex scene was funny. You promised awhile ago that you would write a sequel to this. Where is it?
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol okay, that was freaking hilarious! poor traumatized harry. and the snarking between siri and sev was great, just an awesome job with their personalities. keep up the great work :D
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE can you write a chapter where Harry has loud sex with Draco Malfoy in the next room just to annoy Sirius and Severus? You could have them both freak out; Sirius because Harry is fucking Draco and Severus, because Draco is fucking Harry. It would be so funny to see them get a taste of their own medicine and maybe decide to be quieter when they're having sex
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was great. it would be awsome iff harry really did leat them ceatch him with draco.
person lyra666
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
B-E-A-utiful tyvm i needed a laugh after reading your other one (truly content)


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