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for That One Time

by Arasagi

schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! I had missed this story!! Update soooooon! Happy holidays!! ;)
person jancsrey
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the story! want more

i hope ginny is not a bad guy on this one
person Marke
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story so far! A new and interesting idea.
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor leo iunderstand that harry cheated on ginny but i dohope that ginny cheated on her firsti guess i want ginny the bad guy i don
t like her and way i hope that harry gets cusdoy of his kids and get with draco and what wrong with draco good job want more
person Hushpuppy22
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What woman would want to house the random (or so she thinks) kid of a former Death Eater/guy who humiliated and bullied your family at school? Ginny really has not done anything to support Draco and Leo's bad opinion of her whereas Harry obviously cheated on her and is now hiding the fact that he has a kid from one of his, apparently, numbers liasons. How is Harry's family "new" when he was married with one kid already when he got Draco pregnant. Maybe you need to change this so that Leo is a little older than James so that Draco actually has something to be bitter about.
person SParker
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can't wait for the part when all is revealed.:-)
person SP777
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo...what DID happen to this story? Last time I looked it
was at #5 or 6.

I noticed some slight changes, but they add to the story [that
is if there are any or I'm just seeing things]. Other than that,
it's all good.
person flora90
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I Don't log in often but for this, I knew I had to leave a review. I am really enjoying the premise and I love mpreg!Draco. I hope you write some more. BTW, I am a bit confused, did he have an affair while married? Because Leo I am assuming was born after James since he's Albus' age?
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very beautifully done :D
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ginny is being a bitch. you can't inaslt some one then get mad when they take offence. but i can't wait to see whare thi gose.