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for A Letter to Hermione

by Goddess81

schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here's a $50 to help with the ransom. :-) Yes, that was written differently, but I liked how you jumped around a bit and didn't make us sit through the normal mundane chapters in between. It was very effective in leaning toward the realism of life. People don't simply get over old relationship quickly and then successfully jump into another. I am glad Severus sees that, even if he's wrong and Hermione is ready for him. lol I look forward to more really soon! Happy New Year, HG4eva
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Wow that was great!! I love your little plot bunnies and I send them lots of carrots and lettuce. And for you my dear some chocolate and wine to loosen up your muse and get the chapters flowing. I bow to your Severus' rant and kiss, it was very well written.
person use2b2t2
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was pretty good for whipping one out. Love Hermione charming the mirrors
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can't have the plot bunnies starving, then I'd be guilty of plot bunny abuse due to neglect.
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story please continue.
It is nice to see a story were after Hermione breaks up with Ron, Harry is still by her side. I loved it when he punches Ron in the face. I wish I had a guy friend like that.
person colao
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to more...
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story!! I loved Hermione's reaction to Lavender. Oh and to your dear little plot bunnies I send lots of lettuce and maybe even a few carrots. I hope that will keep them giong for awhile.
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, we can't have you being taken in, now can we? lol I don't know why I hadn't read this before tonight, but boy am I glad I did. I like the angle you've taken and the Severus you've written. I love Harry and Draco as a coupe. And, I want Hermione to "accidentally" hurt Lavender! *snicker* Now, that Ron's out of the way, it's time for Hermione to start going for what *cough WHO cough* she really wants! Bring it on. :-) Thank you and Merry Christmas to you, HG4eva
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is uber cute! mosdef looking forward to more :)
person Daygonna
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great new update! I can't wait for Severus to find out she's single. Lol