rate_review Reviews

This was a very nice story, well written. I very much enjoyed it. Thank you. :-)

What an entertaining story. I liked that Hermione didn't fall into Lucius' arms immediately. And he wasn't quite the urbane Lothario if he couldn't manage to get a date with her for so long. I suppose his skills at wooing were rusty, if he had any at all. Maybe he was married so young, he hadn't needed any. I'm glad Draco helped his father find happiness, just as Draco himself had found it. And Hermione had a happy outcome, too (well who wouldn't with an invitation to Lucius' bed)? The dialogue, the plot, the characterizations - all so well written. Thank you for sharing!

LaBib

I love this story! You capture some of my favorite elements of the Lumione relationship: his haughtiness, her spark and wit, their delicious sexiness when they finally come together. Well-written (with some wonderful imagery and great lines), wonderfully depicted, and (of course) super hot and sexy. Great work!

That had to be the best fanfiction I've ever read! VERY funny, perfectly written, I could actually get into the story. And the sex scene....delicious is the best word I think! Excellent job!

Hee hee. As usual, this was well-written and sweet. I loved the part where Draco tells Lucius to sit down and shut up, too. Great job!

LOVED IT!!!! A dominant Lucius and a submissive Hermoine; there is truely nothing better.

One day, I hope you write in EXTREME DETAIL all about the 'games' that Lucius plays with Hermoine. I know I will have wet 'knickers' for a week!!

You leave me breathless with all of your D/s stories.