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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the Texas clear blue sky, nothing quite like it!
Awesome story, the only grammar blip I caught was when you said Neville was Head of House - the Head is supposed to be in place of the word you have there.
Other than that, great chapter!
Awesome story, the only grammar blip I caught was when you said Neville was Head of House - the Head is supposed to be in place of the word you have there.
Other than that, great chapter!
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic, I hope more is to come soon. As a fellow Texan, I must agree with out on the color of the sky. It is a nice rich shade of blue. Love it. If I could somehow get the color of paint I would paint my whole house the same color. And maybe a little white so it'll look like clouds.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet. I want to read next chapter, would you mind hurrying alittle bit more? ;)
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!! Jame and Scorpius are so cute!! I really, really like them...
And, I'm back! I was so excited for an update. I hope you son is doing better! I really see myself getting really hooked on this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Until next time!
And, I'm back! I was so excited for an update. I hope you son is doing better! I really see myself getting really hooked on this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Until next time!
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww so cute! I look forward to more! I'm anxious to see how they interact now as adults :D Good job!
-DM
-DM
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must say that even though we haven't gotten into much yet, I really like this story so far. I can't wait to see Harry and Draco's relationship develop further and I love James. He's such a little cutie-pie! So far so good!
Also, if you're looking for a beta, I'd be more than happy to help you out. I've never been one before, but I'm great at spotting grammar and spelling mistakes. My email is klarason18@msn.com if you're interested.
Also, if you're looking for a beta, I'd be more than happy to help you out. I've never been one before, but I'm great at spotting grammar and spelling mistakes. My email is klarason18@msn.com if you're interested.
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
there's definitely an interesting story going on here! I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens, especially how James and Scorpius get along(and their fathers of course!) I love your style, keep it up! :D
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait to see where you are going with this story. I love the concept of it already and hope you update regularly. James is really cute, I enjoyed the scene with his Aunt Minni and am anxious for his first meeting with Scorpius. Good job and keep it up.
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning, I want to read more rigth now, please keep on writting.