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i love that hermione is faithful and that pet is trying to protect harry

i love draco and pansy i do hope that ron grows up and i do hope that ginny gets stop before she ruin their realtionship i think that harry having his daughter take from him and voldy and the abuse from the big and albus is enough for him plus the malfoys i think pansy and hermoine need to stop before she hurts harry but also harry gets clip of the future so maybe he could help save him self from the potion and why doesn't sirius and remus know about the baby

found it love it harry had a baby yeah albus should die

i hope in pray that harry and draco mate i also hope that ginny gets hurt but i do hope that what ever plan ginny has back fires on her and i want more that i found you please update soon i plan ion going back and re read and review each chapter but it late today so see you firday

glad to see some more to the story. i like how things are progressing so far and i can't wait to see who lucius ends up with. couple of small plot issues: in the earlier chapters draco talks about his mom being a bitch and being happy if she would die, then a couple chapters later she's mentioned as being dead. same with sirius but in reverse, when 'mione is talking to harry she mentions his feelings about losing sirius, but then a chapter or two later he's running errands for dumbledore. and there are a lot of spelling and grammar issues, but overall, a very good story. keep it up, i look forward to more :)

Wow!

Question: do you have some sort of mailing list? If so, I'd like very much to be on it.

This fic is grea. Sweet and funny, full of suprises. Not to mention hot.

Looking forward to an update.
Annabeth
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I was really enjoying the story until you revealed that Harry lost his bits. I think that that was an unnecessary insertion into the story and I'm sure you'll lose readers because of it. You should mention it somewhere in your warnings its a bit strange and unpleasant for people who don't like FemHarry. I wouldn't have started reading if I'd known.

I wonder who is Lucius Mate! :D Update soon!