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for Every girl wants a hero.

by Goddess81

person Anon
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok, im hooked! you gotta post more..i love the funny tidbits. and severus is so batman its not funny..he fits the role
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story. I rarely read unfinished works as it is usually my bad luck to fall in love with a story only to find it has been abandoned. I really hope that you finish this. Other than some punctuation mistakes it is really wonderful. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree that magneto is totally hot however I believe I am the wrong sex for Ian in the movie. That is too bad because he is awesome. I also thought Monk, I hope that is the right name, was cool too. It would be fun to turn him and breaks the vows of celibacy. He he he
person colao
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I simply dig superheros and their villains, so write on!
person Sev'sgal
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the premise. Like that Snape handed Ron his butt. I never liked the Ron/Hermione couple. Pease keep it going.
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NO ! That is so unfair I loved that I need to see more writen and soon pleaswe I would love to see where you take this...
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see that you put out two chapters in one day. Excellent start and I can't wait to see where you go from here. Thanks for sharing!
person Angie30
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this! Im with Herimone... Severus has a Cum in your pants kind of voice. *Shivers* Can't wait to read more! Ten stars!!!!!!!!!
person colao
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I, for one, am looking forward to the next chapter. Please, indulge me...
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just had this picture of Ron trying to dress up in lime green spandex and jumping out at Hermione, only to get his nose broken, LOL. Cute premise, I like this one.