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by MegaCurious

person EvaBrick
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have a sprained wrist too... so many typos...

Great story. :)
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What I want is more!!! And lots of it!! Not to mention that marauder sandwich didn't sound like a bad thing... but only after lots more Sirius!! I have always liked these two together. I really hope you update soon. And A lot! Have happy holidays!
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is so good! Please continue writing! You definitely satisfied my craving for the night ;) Hahaha! Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think I speak for everyone when I say more sex should happen next!!!!!!
person stray523
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Much hotness! Please don't stop!
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVE that Sirius made note of her 'list'.

My wish is that you provide extreamly detailed chapters for each and everyone of the 'kinks to try'.

The Sirius/Hermoine relationship has ample posibilities. Especially since Sirius is such a dominant personality; that feeds well into Hermione's submissive side.
person WesleyY7
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a huge fan of Sirius/Hermione (mostly because I think he'd be too damaged after Azkaban, but I do enjoy twisted/dub-con S/Hr), but your summary interested me so I gave this story a go. I'm so glad I did! While Sirius didn't come back twisted, I still love that he still has that dominant, growling personality. I am enjoying the glimpses into his Hogwarts life via the journal. Your Hermione is great too! It's so her to make lists and research, even when it comes to sex. I love that while she's older, she still has an innocence about her, if that makes sense. I like how you've shown that sex with Ron wasn't all that great, but didn't do it in such a way as to bash him.

"Apparently guy friends don't want explanations when they walk in on you with your mouth around their Godfather's dick."

Okay, this line just cracked me up! Poor Harry!

I am very much looking forward to seeing more updates from you. I can't wait to see what Sirius has planned to continue Hermione's sexual education. (Looking forward to the kinks and teacher/student role-play too!)
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving it!!!! I would like to see the next morning and Harry come over, them eating breakfast when he comes over, then them having 'the conversation'.
person stray523
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That gave me hot flashes! How did Sirius get loose? Will there be more? (please!) :D
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no...you can't leave us hanging like this!!!!!!

Sirius is loose in the house, with visions of Hermoine sucking him off. But will the incident with Harry put an end to the two's fun? OMG, I hope not. I definately foresee a LOT of smut in the future of this story. Especially with Sirius as the dominant and Hermoine as the 'eager' submissive.

PLEASE, I'm begging (on my knees) for you to post SOON!