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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding character development and a very compelling storyline. I am totally looking forward to the sequal and will wait with bated breath until it arrives here at AFF.net. Keep up the GREAT work!!!!
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story! I looked forward to your updates every day! Can't wait to see what happens next. Wish I didn't have to wait until January. Merry Christmas and keep up the good work!
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I super love this fiction! I keep on reading and re-reading it. It`s absolutely fantastic the way you wrote it.
Now, just waiting for the ending.. wish it could go on forever...keep on the good work and good luck with the award!
I did vote for u.. :)
Now, just waiting for the ending.. wish it could go on forever...keep on the good work and good luck with the award!
I did vote for u.. :)
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A good story, but I dislike the punishment in Chapter 30. The fact is that Draco should have been given absolutely no punishment, because he was under the control of another person for the longest period of time. That is like blaming a person who is controlled by a telepathic person for things that the telepathic person makes them do. Totally outrageous in the extreme.
Unfortunately, even in the real world, we have too many people who wish to punish someone even when it is shown that something is not their fault at all.
Unfortunately, even in the real world, we have too many people who wish to punish someone even when it is shown that something is not their fault at all.
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A good last chapter to the story, but it appears to end on a cliffhanger.... might be good to add an epilogue to explain what happened after the last scene. If you are planning on making a sequel, then just disregard my suggestion.
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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ive reread this like three times, its awesome. please update soon!
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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this almost religiously. It is excellent. I hope you update soon.
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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is SOOO good! It's probably one of the best I've ever read, seriously. I've been reading it for the past 4 hours, and as much as I want to be finished to find out what happens I don't want it to end!
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story on Granger enchanted and then found it on here with way more chapters. What a captivating story, I love the pace of the story and how often you update keep up the great work!
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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have got to say, this story is amazing. Having read the other comment I might have had a little google, and found the rest, and the sequel. Wow.
Thank you so much for sharing with us.
Thank you so much for sharing with us.