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for First Night in the Head Dorm

by thewickedwitch

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schedule July 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was great, i like the twist and ending, and they are so cute 

Great writing 

schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the spell and the clock counting down!!!!!! Wonderful tortue and smut.

More stories...PLEASE!
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you wrote it this way, not as a true rape. As it is the story is very clever and hot.