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for Death\'s Design, Fate\'s Plan

by Illiandyandra

schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great plot so far,I hope to read more. I hope life grants you the time to update.
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and how everything is falling apart for Dumbledore. More please
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's been so long since I have read a Harry/Hermione story. =) Please update soon
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must say...this was one hell of a chapter. I absolutely LOVED the dream sequence. I found it ridiculously hot. Even though Hermoine and Ginny didn't do anything but stand there, the thought of them being thoroughly analyzed by the Harrys and Snape was such a great idea! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from this soon!
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Wonderfull! Excellent! Are just some of the words that describe this story. Taking down Dumbledore is always good reading, never get tired of a dark lord hiding as the leader of the light getting his comupins. Full marks!!!!!!
person azphxbrd
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked that chapter.It was great that Sirius's freedom has messed up Albus's current plans causing him to do damage control.I truly enjoyed reading about Hermione's deamscape brought to them by Fate.Keep up the good work.
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok story, a little hard on ron, that rat was as inportant to him as hermoine cat was to her, and she acted like it was know big deal, and and trying to learn thinks form hermoine is hard becouse she treat you bad, how many times does she call ron a stupid git, but that ok, only when he fight back is there a problem.

kind of like the going back in time to save everybody.