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I was wondering when we will see something bad happen to Neville,his and Severus' relationship seems to be put at hold. And I'm sad that Draco(whose a sub) and Hermione(a pup) both get dangerous things happen to them and Neville seems to have been thrown to the side, I miss his cute delicious self...can't wait to read more you have me hooked once more and I hope you continue this amazing tale and never let any of your readers go.

I have to say this is still the only unfinished fic I'm coming back time and time agen. And I can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing a grate job. keep it up and coming, so will I!! ;D

YEAH!!! a new chapter! and i am very glad that you are back and well! i have so missed not reading the stroy! i cant wait to see what else is going to happen with the other mates and what lance is going to tell them. i so do hope that you will be posting the next chapter soon! i so LOVE THIS STORY! so i dont care how long it takes or what anyone-and i mean anyone--has to say that you will continue to write!!! :)

Hermione should be slapped every f*cking time she is using 'Ehm...'
I'm wating so much for the moment when Tara will just say them to fuck off (even if that won't happen ever). Poor girl... is it really that hard for them to address her by her name? Not just 'girl' or even worse, 'bitch'

you are definately worth thw wait!! fabtadtic chapter!! cant wait to hear about sev and fenrir with lance!!
cant wait for more!!

Great chapter! I'm glad you're back!

so excited for another chapter!

AWEsOME!!! So different from what I have read of this pairing and I truely enjoy this very much.

Hi, I just noticed on your author page that you are having a problem getting your chapters back from your beta, I don't know if I would be a very good beta but I would be more than willing to try if you are looking for someone. I really love your story and have missed the updates over the last few months (I have just finished rereading both parts of the story lol ) Thanks for writing the story it is really fantastic! Just Submit has been my favorite fanfiction since I started reading it!!
If you are looking for another beta my email is vicky.randall@comcast.net

Please don't abandon this story!!! I am so anxious to see what will happen next!