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I am still eagerly following your story. You are writing it for yourself right? Well then, you can't please everyone and just write the story the way you want to. I am still enjoying it. I don't mind the slower updates, take your time babe.

Love Sonia :)

This is such an awesome chapter! All the subs interacting with the dominants and each other was great :) I really liked Thalien having the control not to just grab Hermione and let her do it when she was ready and needed him!

I LOVE this story. And I will wait patiently for each chapter.

The story line is great and the smut if even better.

Please do not let a few get you down. You have devoted fans for this story and for your style of writting. Not matter how long in between.

More...please!

This is another great chapter. I like seeing the breaks between Lance and Hermione's meetings. Would love to see sessions between Fenrir and Severus. Thank you for writing this story.

I will say that this:
"wait if I ever will be able to upload all the chapters and complete the story."
Disturbed me... I hope you finish this too... cause admitting that you might not finish doesn't encourage your readers to continue reading... and I hope I see more from you as soon as you are able! :)

I am dying over here! when is she and Fenrir going to have another session? wink wink nudge nudge! lol

Loved the chapter and as always i await the next update patiently.

Oh, I didn't know about those rules, sorry about that!
I just can't stop reading this fic, because as much as I hate how Hermione and Draco are acting, I love the other characters. You really made a good work with them. So, I'm just going to shut up and read.

Thanks for answering!

I just finished reading both Just Submit and Just Submit 2. I thought that they were wonderfully thought out and well written. I very much like a closer look at the werewolf clans and how they are run. Your ideas are very well thought out. I hope you continue writing this story. Keep up the great work!

I'm glad to see an update. Keep em coming please.

I already realized that I will never get answers to my questions, but why is Hermione so afraid around dominants when it comes to sex? As if any of them would dare to hurt her... or as if she isn't the bitch to get all 'oh god' and 'oh Merlin' if they touch her -.- She is really a pathetic whimp. I was rereading some chapters, and it's really annoying how Hermione's every second sentence is 'I can't'. And Draco, why does he think he is so much better than Tara?
And of course Tara: why do you write about her as if she is the bitch to hurt and then throw away? Why is she a bitch while it's so much nice and natural if the others are acting like her? After you wrote that scene where she is saying that she doesn't enjoy it their treatmen became abuse in my eyes. It doesn't matter that she feels good for satisfiing them it's just pure instinct. She is a human being, and you as the author should know it best... Draco and Hermione both would deserve the same treatment.