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Oh, don't feel bad, I like the plotty chapters too! This one was fun, I love how Hermione keeps putting her foot in it with the other dominants. Will she get in trouble with Fenrir for talking trash about Tara and acting like she did with Toric? So I'm guessing the next scene will be Neville's first truly public performance, yes? Will Hermione have to watch? I can't wait to read what happens next!

Definitely enjoying this as much as part 1, but I am missing Fenrir. :)

This is a great story so far and I love reading it! I'm constantly worried for Neville though, and hope that one day he an finally become used to being a super sub! :)

please keep posting!!! I love this story and it's partner story.

Dude.. Keep going!!! Love it.

I just ran across this story here and decided, on a whim, to read the previous one too. This is so entirely captivating that I found myself semidreaming about it last night. Please, can you tell me how often you update? I think I have checked 7 times in the last two days just hoping that there would be more. I was through the moon when I read that you had nearly 30 chapters of this one complete. Thank you for what seemed like a diverting bit of violent porn but turned out to be genuinely good plots and complex and fabulous sexuality. My compliments.

~Mia

P.S. If you don't reply to reviews on the site, my email is prissiepup@hotmail.com

I'd really like to know if you have any sort of schedule for posting. Mostly, I just want MORE. Yesterday. :}

Enjoying your new fic! Keep updating! Really enjoying it :) I'm usually not a big fan of people having multiple partners, but this is defiantely the one expception!

The story is definitely worth posting. Keep writing.

I am so glad that you have decided to continue with "Just Submit". I absolutely loved the original and am quickly becoming enamered with the new one.

But I am a Dominant/submissive slut...so more please!!!

I really like your story and can't wait until the next chapter!

Great story, please continue writing it! It's not only smutty, it actually has a plot! Good job!