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for Just Submit 2

by grugster

person Dark_of_Night
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story (Just Submit) and loved it! I can't wait to see what happens in Just Subit 2! Keep up the good work!
person em
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now my favourite story please keep going x
person xoburntofferings
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. I absolutely loved "Just Submit", and this story is turning out to be just as amazing!
person Mia
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Somehow, just reading this chapter made me feel exceedingly neervous. But in a good way. A very, VERY good way.

~Mia
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
gotta have some plot mixed in
person Izipot
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as usual, keep up the excellent work :D
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! Amazing story! Update tomorrow please! ;)
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for continuing the story. I know that the plot must be advanced and that there will not be smut in all of the chapters, but you can't blaim me for wishing.

I like that Hermoine is making her feeling known, she is a 'pup' and her wishes should be considered. Maybe, Ages will make Hermoine spend time with Tara to learn why she is so 'accessable' to the dominantes. Hermoine needs to lean to accept ALL of the members of the clan, so that she can do what is best for the ENTIRE clan.

As always, I anxiously await your next chapter. I must admit, your betas are doing a GREAT job!!
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and cannot wait until the next chapter is up!
person circe266
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL, of course Hermione would be disapproving (and jealous?) of the other girl. I liked reading about her meeting another hot dominant hungry for her attention, though I really really want the next lemon to be her and Yorik.

Please update soon!