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by grugster

person Trini
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it, but I tend to look over the slash parts, so thank you for all the warnings in the chapters! I liked the way you're making them struggle with the changes, but I would also like to see more of the day to day life of a werewolf in a clan, not just the sex, but the things that makes dominants and subs so different, the roles they must play, that kind of things, that you are showing little by little.

Read yo next chapter!!
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... I'm really, really hooked on these stories...

And seriously impressed! If you hadn't mentioned it, I really wouldn't have noticed that English wasn't your first langue.

I really, really love this series... I'd love to see more. Soon, if at all possible. Just saying.

Until next time.
Happy holidays if you celebrate.
-Alena
person xoburntofferings
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas! And thanks so much for the wonderful new chapter. I can't wait for the next.
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the update,but starting to miss Fenrir! Hope you had a lovely christmas...
person circe266
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading Severus' and Draco's perspectives in this chapter. And I really like the idea of Fenrir enforcing his dominance over Severus . . . yum!
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yummy thanks for the early update
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
short but still yummy
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
TY for the Xmas present! and Merry Chritsmas to you too........... Can't wait for the update............ Bring out the fire department!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
person circe266
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was incredibly hot. Lucky Hermione! I want more of her with Yorik, then with other dominants (2 at once would be great).
person xoburntofferings
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! What a great chapter! I love that you are introducing new fun characters. Keep up the awesome job!