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What I like about this story is that the sex really does further the plot in most cases. This last chapter I did not find that to be the case and when the chapter was over I was like, okay Darius had a lady who died and only has sex with males but I don't think that enough happened. I felt like the chapter was really disconnected from the last chapter and I had to actually go back and read the chapter before it to remember what's going on, plotwise.

I really love the story and want another update i just ask it be more cohesive and I want some major plot action! what is happening? There needs to be some type of action? What is the goal of this story? Is it just an excuse to write sexy smut, cause don't get me wrong I love those stories! but you have made it seem that this story has a progression in place and I just didn't feel it in this chapter.

I have gone from thinking this might be an ok story to not be able to put it down. Well done!!

Loved it. Please keep it going.

Love Sonia :)

I like the chapter. I was wating for when she would finaly try to find a book en read about her situation :D Hope you update again soon!

Take all this time you need! I love this Fic!

I really like your story. I've been reading since you first started this. I had the chance to read Just Submit 1 when it was finished and I could see the characters changing and evolving. Now that the pace is so slow, it's difficult to follow. Don't worry though, I wait till there are a couple of chapters and then read them together, or I go a couple chapters back and read on. I won't give up on the story, even though it's slow.
Keep up the good work and don't worry so much about the pace. Write when you can, as fast as you are comfortable with. Don't let anyone tell you what or when you should write!
-M

I love this story. Feel free to take your time because I understand life gets in the way. I look forward to seeing your updates.

I just love this story. I wish you could update quicker, but I understand that life gets in the way. I just wanted to let you know I think the story is great and I hope you will be able to finish it. Thanks

hi there,

i wanted to say I love your story. No matter how slow you get i will be faithful. I love the characters and their development as well as the hot scenes. So be encouraged.
-falon

I'm usually dreadful at leaving a review, so my apologies for not leaving one earlier. I've read this story for quite some time now, and utterly enjoyed it. I was hoping that you would continue with it at some point, so I kept checking for a new update. As such, I'm positively thrilled that you are writing/updating once more, and not mad at you at all for the pause. I'm too happy with being able to read it all again for such nonsense. :)

So please, keep writing and take your time, even if some complain that things are developing too slowly. Good things are worth waiting for, and a lot of things don't make sense when they change too quickly.