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by grugster

person colao
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...wow...
person circe266
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! To be honest, I found the action in this chapter to be a bit more disturbing than hot, though the quality of the descriptions and the writing overall is good, as always.

As a Yorik fan, I am on the edge of my seat in eagerness for the next chapter. Please update soon!
person clanz
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hi there
just wanted to tell you that you are doing a great job with this story. sorry new with this site and not really used to write reviews but i just tought that with your story it was necessary to do it.
I cannot wait for your next update.
merry christmas and happy be-lated new year
clau
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My poor Drake......... *snif* Please let him be ok...........
person dark_of_night
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and how it is progressing. If you want a beta or someone just to read the chapters and let you know how everything is flowing, I'd love to do it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person april
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter.
person xoburntofferings
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I was so happy to see a new chapter. Great Job!
person Dawn
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the last few chapters! It was interesting to see the others POV. I like it! This is definately my favorite story :)
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the bit with Calan & Yorik, that was super hot. More of Calan, please. :) Also, anytime the three subs have playtime is adorable and fun, so I really liked that scene too. BUT I am really starting to miss Fenrir!!! When does Hermione get to have alone time with him again? (or with him and Yorik?) Also, will Hermione ever be with the other dominants in her pack? Keep up the good work!
person Beth
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am totally addicted to ur story I have now read the first and what is up of the second part in one night I did not want to put it done. Keep it up can't wait for the next chapter.