rate_review Reviews

If you need someone for reading your chapters prior to the updates, my email is ishtarluz2012@gmail. As for this chapter ........... TY TY TY my poor Draco is on the save side. As for Yorik............ if my imagination is correct ....... What a beautiful specimen of a man............. LOL

Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter. Sooo excited.

a guilty pleasure...

This is my favorite chapter so far because of the Hermione/Fenrir/Yorik action. So very well done, from Yorik's initial disappointed comment about at least getting to hold her while Fenrir had his fun, to lucky Hermione sandwiched between the two hot werewolves, to the surprisingly hot dom/sub action between Fenrir & Yorik. More of this, please!

I just hope that Draco is OK, and that Calan doesn't leave the pack.

As always, your prose is pleaserable to read (even though I don't normally like slash). Yours however, always seems more erotic with the D/s aspect. Very well written.

What is wrong with Draco's balls? *I can't believe that I just wrote that ;0*

Thank you for promising that Yorik will get his chance to 'pleasure' Hermione. I can't wait!!!!

First let me tell you I have been reading stories on this site for about a year and a half okay,and this is the first review I have made. I LOVE THIS STORY, I MEAN LOOOOVVVVVEEEEE IT!!! By me reviewing this means that this story is soooo good! The last few weeks I just wanted to read a Fenrir story cause I want to see the submit part. About a week ago, By some way I came to your story and I read the fisrt one and I read this one. But today I was just on and I saw this at the top and I said lets see if there at a update, and there was. AND I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I was a little bit unsure at the beginging, not into the hole torture thing but you so worked it. I love how you have the submitting but also I love the comfort in it as well. I can't wait for the next chapter and this is one story that I WILL be checking back for. Fenrir caring for Draco I loved it. I know that I keep going on but great story!!!

What an update, I had missed Fenrir! Update soon!

incredibly hot!

I am absolutly in love with this story!!!!! i read Just Submit a while ago and have just found the sequel and fell in love with the story again, thank you so much for posting it =)

Hey totally addicted to your stories! It sounds as if your problem with having your unpublished chapters would be easily solved by a beta reader. I would be happy to read through them for you. Correct spelling punctuation etc...and send them back to you. I do a few more authors on here, the bonus for me, I get to read early chaps :D my beta address is
scarlet.bandit.girl@googlemail.com
Feel free to email any time! Looking forward to your next installment!!!
Scarlet Quill xoxo