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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Just what I needed on a nice snowy day. I can't to see how this story unfolds.
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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love what you're doing with this story! I love how you explain the subs' natural reactions to the dominants and their desire to please them. Seeing Neville with Fenrir and Yorik was a great time, and the scene with Ages and Draco was super cute. :) I can't wait to read what happens next!
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again! Look forward to the next chapter, I love the mix that you had in the chapter. a little bit of everything. and I cant wait into they turn into werewolves. Love your work Keep it coming.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do not fear, your fans are devoted to you because you are an excellent writer!!!
I was so hot from the threesome with Hermoine and her alpha and beta. It was well worth the wait.
Neville is still very afraid and I hope that he becomes more confident. And I trust that Draco will be his impish self again soon.
I was so hot from the threesome with Hermoine and her alpha and beta. It was well worth the wait.
Neville is still very afraid and I hope that he becomes more confident. And I trust that Draco will be his impish self again soon.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the only thing that i think might be a little off is that you had the doms trying to teach neville and hermione that they need to tell the doms what they need or want such as neville and igor with neville telling him no dry entery
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor draco. hope he'll be ok. neville too
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is just sooo great! I anxiously await each of your updates. Poor Draco, he's in so much pain. Yay Hermione because even though she's a sub she's a powerful sub. I wouldn't expect anything less from her. Finally poor Neville, it's obvious that the poor child is about to lose his mind. I really do hope he makes it through his changing though. And there is something that is attracting me to Calan. He's a dominant but his actions scream submissive in so many ways. I like him. Hopefully he can repair his relationship with Draco and make up for his bad performance.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Awesome chapter had me a little worried about poor Draco. But definately reassuring to see all the dominants come together to help them. Eager to see what you will pull out next!
In regards to you wanting someone to pre-read your chapters before publishing to check the flow and narratives, i would be very happy to help! You have me completely hooked and a few hopes of what will happen next! Send me an email I'm totally up for helping and dont worry I wont try to steal your position for beta! LOL
Speak soon
Scarlet Quill UK
In regards to you wanting someone to pre-read your chapters before publishing to check the flow and narratives, i would be very happy to help! You have me completely hooked and a few hopes of what will happen next! Send me an email I'm totally up for helping and dont worry I wont try to steal your position for beta! LOL
Speak soon
Scarlet Quill UK
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far, though the segue from the gentle healing in chapter 5 to the hardcore and (intentionally) somewhat clumsy s&m in chapter 6 was a bit surprising. Other than that - I loved the whole scene in the Lounge. Keep updating!
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I'm so sorry I didn't review last chapter. I read it, and I was really traumatized that Draco was injured, and then life decided to take a turn for the worse. And, while it hasn't exactly improved, I saw an update, and I had to read it, becuase I felt really bad that I didn't review.
Draco's okay! Which is really, really important, because he's kinda, sorta my favorite... The submissive wolf thing just makes him all the more appealing.
Anyways, I enjoyed, as always, even if I nearly cried for Draco. I can't wait for more.
Until next time,
Alena
Draco's okay! Which is really, really important, because he's kinda, sorta my favorite... The submissive wolf thing just makes him all the more appealing.
Anyways, I enjoyed, as always, even if I nearly cried for Draco. I can't wait for more.
Until next time,
Alena