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by grugster

schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I was so close to tears when I saw the update. Actually, I had to wipe a few stary tears away. I really love this story.... I hope this doesnt make my a pervert or anything. Please update soon
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so curious to find out what was in the bowel...ice cubes; PRICELESS!!!!!

As an avid fan, I will post a review everytime for you. I want you to keep the story going. I LOVE this story as well as the first "Just Submit".

Your interplay between the characters is very satisfying.

MORE...PLEASE!!!
person thestralhorse
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely still love this story it is fantastic and the interaction between fenrir, yoric and nevile is awesome
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sexy, hot and wonderful!
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
With the amount of hits,i dont think people are getting fed up! Just lazy with their reviews! Glad to see nevil is finally embracing his inner wolf! Brilliant! Cant wait to see hermione back with fenir's pack! Loving the plot!
person Jessica
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok so I don't want to feel like everytime I review I say the same thing but your story is AMAZINGGGG! This chapter as sooo hot! I loved it! You have no idea how excited I am to read your story. I just get this feeling and this feeling is like go check for a up date and there it is!! I think that if you would stop writting this story I would just die, :-( lol, no but I do love your story. And I just want to put this out there, I can't wait for this Fenrir and Yorik scene ok! lol. Keep.up.this.good.work.
person circe266
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the all the different pairings/vignettes in this chapter. I am somewhat surprised that Severus is the first one to talk of his love for Hermione; I would have expected the secret softie Yorik to be the first one to admit his love for his 'pup'.

Side note: I hope that Yorik's thought about wanting Fenrir to dominate him again is foreshadowing for an upcoming chapter, hopefully with Hermione included too. Oooh, an interlude with Hermione and all three of her mates at once would be awesome! *looks hopefully at author*

I can't wait for your next chapter, although I am hoping that an encounter between young Hermione and the elderly Ages isn't too icky.

Thanks for the faster than usual update!
person Caitlin
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've fallen in love with this story :) Thanks for it!!! I hate this cliff hanger though :P
person Jessica
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO, lol I didnt even notice I was at the end of the chapter into the last two lines. For the record I love Neville, lol. I love how I just came to just check if there is a update and there one is for me. I love you. I am jumping up and down, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking,lol.
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for making Draco OK! Keep them coming.........