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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I anxiously await each update. I will say that I felt bad for poor Draco in this chapter. Clearly he didn't know what to do with himself. He knew he needed to be punished, but at the same time, he didn't think he could handle it. Also, I love how Yorik seems to have two sides to him at sometimes. The very hard dominant side but also the loving caring side, especially when it concerns Morgan. It's obvious that he cares for him very much. I would love to see more of Calan and Igor. I find myself very intrigued by those two characters. Well enough babbling, the update was great and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If reviews are the payment necessary for such freaking hot fics, I will very gladly pay!! Damn, but this is kinky and I love it. Great job in portraying the differences between the subs, I am very interested to see how they will progress as they get closer and then become true subs for the pack. I wonder, who will Hermione fuck next? :D Happy writing!
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm definitely NOT losing interest -- I love this story so much. I do have to admit that I much prefer the Hermione-chapters to the Neville-chapters, as I am not a big slash fan. Although I think that I would enjoy reading about Fenrir dominating Yorik, and even Fenrir dominating Severus. Preferably with Hermione watching and participating.
Can't wait to read your next chapter.
Can't wait to read your next chapter.
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yumminess. cant wait for more
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love what you've done wiht Neville and I hope you update soon.
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Super sweet to see Neville bonding with F. and Y. I love that they are so sweet with him. :) And the last chapter's scene with Hermione and the Head Beta was super hot! Can't wait for the next part!
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to show you some love. I adore this story! Keep it goin!
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Always realy look forward to the next chapters coming out if you ever need a beta give me a bell. Have been reading this story since the very first chapter of Just Submit was published love the fact that you update so often.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Just what I wanted to read on a snowy day. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I got involved with Just Submit a week ago and read through it so fast because it was so good. I was ecstatic to find a sequel!!! Do you think you'll be doing any FenrirxYorik in the future? It'd be an epic couple to do it with.