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by grugster

schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aii!!! Cliffhanger! It was nice to see Morgan and Hermione get some quality time together. :) Will she ever be with Amaris that way? Pleeeeease post the next chapter soon, I can't wait to see what Ages has to say to her!
person theladykt
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmmm wonder what was up with her
person circe266
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to read how Hermione satisfies her pack (except Amaris -- I hope for Amaris' sake that she gets some action with a sexy sub like Draco). What was going on in Hermione's head?

I LOVE your story, and look forward so much to every chapter you post, but I find myself hoping that the next chapter doesn't have Hermione having sex with Ages. There is something about the thought of a very young Hermione having sex with an elderly man who reminds her of Dumbledore which is just . . . ugh. I'm up for reading about Hermione paired with just about any other dominant you like, though. ;D
person Caitlin
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great!! Please keep it coming :)
person Jessica
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good! I loved it, I can't wait for the nexy chapter, and WHEN THEY BECOME WOLVES, full moon here they come I cant WAIT!!! Keep it coming.
person colao
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by upcoming conversation between Ages and Hermione; I like the dynamics of the pack interactions, too.
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Morgan bring the sweetness in the story.. Please keep them coming......... Do you have an specific day when you update?
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeay, Hermione and Fenrir! Love it when the 'family' are about,love the way fenrir thinks about hermione!
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was just wondering if it would be possible that we could see
some sexual interactions between Hermione and Neville. Just to put
a little spin on an already perfect story. I will totally understand if
you dont use it. Just a suggestion :-)
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!! I so cant wait for the next chapter!!!!! Im so excited & I know that
Im going to love it like I love the rest of the story. This story is awsome!
Please keep up the good work!