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by grugster

person Anon
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the changing, i am so excited!! this was great, poor hermione she is so scared and confused.
person Idril_Luinwe
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next chapter in this story! Please post soon!
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am afraid to ask what the alpha and two betas did? But I am glad that Hermoine has chosen Ages as one of her mates two. That makes two alphas and two betas; this can only strengthen the clan. But also make Hermoine a VERY happy and satisfied sub *shiver at the thought*!!!!

I can not wait for the graphic details of the change and who will take her fist, second, third, and (now) fourth. Severus gets to take part in both Hermoine's and Neville's claiming.

I am all hot and wet, just thinking about it. BETAS, please beta and post soon!!!
person Jessica
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:-( So after reading your notes I don't want to read this chapter. But my need to read your amazing story I did. I just want the next one, I can't wait!! I am so EXCITED the day has come!!!!! I love your story, that is why I couldn't wait to read this chapter even if I known that they wouldn't change into the next one, I LOVE YOUR WORK.keep it coming, the best!!
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just for the record, I loved seeing Hermione with Ages, and how he responded to her. That was awesome! And I love that he is one of her mates now, too. Only the best for our girl, after all!!

I really enjoyed this chapter, I love how you describe how all their emotions affect each other so deeply. The little smooch between Fenrir and Hermione was really sweet. I AM DYING TO READ ABOUT THE CHANGING!!!!!! Please update soon, I can't wait, seriously!!!!
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love when Fenrir admitted his feelings for Hermione.......... Now the interesting part come to it the changing.........
person circe266
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How sweet that Fenrir finally admitted his love for her. I hope that he and the others didn't do anything too stupid!

Please post your chapter about Hermione's changing soon!
person Caitlin
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you should upload all the chapters you are working on now :) I don't want to wait for them. I think I would translate them happily if it meant I could see them and know what happens next lol. Anyways, love the story and I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter :)
person Jessica
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I feel wrong saying this but I love the deep penetration, it is so hot. Great chapter and I cant WAIT for the next, so excited!
person amanda
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please please keep writing, i love this story its so interesting, i especially like Fenir and Yurik's relationship w/ Hermione