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I love Toric, he had to try so very hard to not give in to Hermione. The chapter was great, I love the ending with Ages and how happy he is with Nevile and Hermione!! can't wait for what happens next :)

Ok I will make an order for all this guys or better up bottle them up and sell them world wide........ LOL Your descriptions are so detail and sexy........ UF!

Yay Im happy the new update is here!!! You have a loyal reader
on your hands!!!! *wipes away tears* I love this story!

I like Toric, he knows how to treat a sub and a pup!! I am sure it was difficult for him to restrain himself with a "challenging pup" as Miller calls her.

At least one of her mates was able to take care of her. Especially the one with the most self-control...no wonder Ages is the Head Alpha.

Please continue!!

Thank you so much for explaining about Neville. I wouldn't want him to be neglected...not that that will be likely with Severus around.

My, my; but doesn't Hermoine become a saucy wench when she is in "HEAT". All those dominate males...just how is a poor pup to choose?!?!?!?!?!

I hope that Toric has something KINKY in mind for our dear inputent pup *evil wink*.

That was funny! I love the lightness in this chapter.....

lol toric really has his hands full with hermione, and Ages is sneaky!!!!! I am glad Yoric was the third one to mate with Hermione =) Loved this chapter can't wait for the next one

Ah, that Ages is a clever one, isn't he? The scene with Hermione and all the warriors was a great one. Them preening for her and her laughing about it was just awesome.

One thing - a typo at the end you were referring to Yorik but I'm pretty sure you still meant "Toric". Are we going to get to see the two of them bathing together? Is she going to let him get more intimate with her than just assistance with bathing?

I like the little hint you gave us that Hermione and Tara could be friends...is that going to happen? I think it would be good for her to be friendly with another female sub.

LOVED this chapter but sad to hear that the boys are being punished! But I guess they knew that was coming. AS ALWAYS I can't wait to read more, seeing your story in the queue always makes my day! Update soon. :)

Pleassssssssse post the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!! pleasssssssssssse

LOL, I love Yorik chanting "I can do it!" in his head to encourage himself, then lording it over Fenrir and Severus. And Hermione drunk on testosterone is awesome. I like how the fact that she is a sassy sub blows their minds.

Please please please update faster! Your loyal readers can hardly wait to devour each new chapter.