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Another excellent chapter. Thanks babe.

love Sonia :)

I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this story. I especially liked this chapter. I'm glad somebody's on Hermione's side and not just pushing her around. :) Looking forward to the next update!

tooooooottttally loved this chapter! I love learning about the inner workings of the clan, and the pup's place in the grand scheme. I KNEW she was going to get in trouble, running about looking for Toric! The speech from the Elders was awesome, and very cute how she defended Toric to them. :) I can't wait until Fenrir and the rest wake up and hear about all this drama! Update soon please :)

I really,REALLY like Toric---he could be a lot of real fun later too (right?) i so love what those stupid mates of her's did :) i also am dying to find out what else is going to happen and i am so hoping that it will be soon!!! :) i wonder if her being in heat will follow that regular pattern or if like so many other things with her she will have that be different too. oh i hope that you will update soon so we can see what poor ages is dealing with having to wait ;)

Toric was delightful, and it was awesome seeing him try to resist her attempts at seducing him. Loved the cuddling with Ages at the end, adorable. Can't wait until the boys are back from the infirmary! I want more Fenrir/Hermione/Yorik! LOVE that.

Although there are tonnes of spelling mistakes in this story, and misused names of characters, I am riveted by it and can't wait for you to post more. The idea is a very original one.

Love Sonia :)

Love it!Keep it coming, your story is the best. Great chapter as well.

Oh I just loved that last chapter! Love toric! He's brilliant,V.sexy!

I like Toric!!! He's a keeper! He seems like a very strong-willed person. He knew that he had to follow his orders. While many, possibly even Yorik, would have said screwed the orders and let's just fuck, Toric was adamant that he had a job to be done. On top of that, I love how he was almost gentle with Hermione in their lovemaking. My vote is yes! I'm also awaiting for the return and redemption of Calan! I know he can do better! LOL. Poor Fenrir, Severus, and Yorik. Like the saying goes, the road to hell is paved with good intentions. They tried so hard to do the right thing by taking the potion but they only ended up making the situation worse, causing somewhat of a makeshift hell for the clan. Not only are they sick and can't protect their clan, but Hermione's in heat and worrying herself sick. Seems like a good time for another clan to try and overthrow them right? LMAO *hint* Great update as always. I loved it!

Mmmm, I love Toric! He really knows how to take care of a horny pup.

I am worried about Fenrir, Yorik, and Severus. I hope that they are OK in the next chapter. Although I wouldn't mind if Hermione, still in heat, got some action from Radgar, the Taye Diggs lookalike. (at least, that is how I imagine him, based on your description in the previous chapter)

Thanks for the update!