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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD I read through this all now, and was disappointed--but only because I thought there were more chapters posted here already! This is a very interesting story (although I do admit, there are times I'm confused as to who is who (with the OCs) and what their role is. The female eldest was very funny... I loved her going off on Toric and hitting him with her cane! XD
I am a little sad that Neville seems to be fading in to the background... I would like to hear more on how he is doing. Hermione is interesting, but I want to know what is going on with Neville and Draco as well. I know Hermione is the more powerful one, but especially after his first changing, I'm curious about how Neville is feeling and acting. Is he more comfortable? Is he like Hermione finding more people attractive? Or is he feeling lonely because Severus seems quite preoccupied with Hermione lately? I'm also curious about Tara... is she as bad as Draco says? Will we be seeing her?
And as a totally random side note... especially at the mention of the wolfsbane, I am now really curious about Remus. How is he surviving in this new world with Voldemort? Is he going to find this clan? I know there is absolutely no hint that he's even alive in here, but since he's one of my favorites AND a werewolf AND originally turned by Fenrir, I can't help but be curious and wonder (I think he would totally be a sub... Remus is really not dominant at all). Speaking of not dominant.. I feel so bad for Morgan (especially after Fenrir mentioned how he was treated when initially brought into the clan). It is strange that he is so submissive yet considered a dominant.
I look forward to reading more!
I am a little sad that Neville seems to be fading in to the background... I would like to hear more on how he is doing. Hermione is interesting, but I want to know what is going on with Neville and Draco as well. I know Hermione is the more powerful one, but especially after his first changing, I'm curious about how Neville is feeling and acting. Is he more comfortable? Is he like Hermione finding more people attractive? Or is he feeling lonely because Severus seems quite preoccupied with Hermione lately? I'm also curious about Tara... is she as bad as Draco says? Will we be seeing her?
And as a totally random side note... especially at the mention of the wolfsbane, I am now really curious about Remus. How is he surviving in this new world with Voldemort? Is he going to find this clan? I know there is absolutely no hint that he's even alive in here, but since he's one of my favorites AND a werewolf AND originally turned by Fenrir, I can't help but be curious and wonder (I think he would totally be a sub... Remus is really not dominant at all). Speaking of not dominant.. I feel so bad for Morgan (especially after Fenrir mentioned how he was treated when initially brought into the clan). It is strange that he is so submissive yet considered a dominant.
I look forward to reading more!
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say, I never really thought much of Neville as the center of a fic/chapter with sex.
...you have completely changed my opinion with this and the previous fic.
*quickly goes to next chapter*
...you have completely changed my opinion with this and the previous fic.
*quickly goes to next chapter*
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how the Eldest defended Hermione and intimidated the dominants. I can't wait to see how her mates and the other dominants have to learn to deal with a powerful, sexy sub.
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my god it seriously makes my day when i see an update to your story, i love it so much!!! Toric is absolutely awesome and i love how Hermione went running to him to keep her safe. The elders are great too, Ages and Toric getting told of was hilarious, can't wait to see Fenrir, Severus and Yoric back in action :)
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chapter!!!!!! Loved it!!!
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah an update! The was helpful and I really enjoyed meeting the Eldest :-) The ideas are so original that I am always wanting more when I reach a chapters end. Thank you!
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I loved the new chapter. And I like how the story is progressing. I can't wait to see where it goes.
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I loved that female eldist! She had me laughing! Fantastic chapter! I like that hermione is still herself, and stil quite a strong minded character! Its one of the things I really enjoy about her! Cant wait for fenrir to come back! Amazing chapter! Definately one of my favourites!
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well about time. No wonder poor My was confused. I'm glad there are people about who can guide her properly.
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was fun, especially the last part........ Poor Ages and the other mates they will have their hands full with Hermione on board........... LOL