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OMG!! I love that she has a friend that she can talk to!
I love the progression of this story. I love that Tara has helped her, by answering some of her fears and Darius has reinforced it.
Amazing!!!!
Cant wait for the next update!!

when will neville be back in the syory?

glad you explained that. Previously Mip and the subs did sound very 'piece of meat/ do what you're told, when you're told, how you're told or else.' It did seem a bit unblanced, despite the whole 'grow old and become an elder' thing.

I love, love, love this story. You have the werewolf system so well thought out and each character and relationship is well developed. I can hardly wait for each new chapter!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I like that Hermione is still sassy and not afraid to stand up to the dominants, even if she is not always right. I like that Tara seems like an OK person.

I don't particularly care for Roland's sense of entitlement, assuming that he should be a mate to Hermione even when he hasn't been appealing in the slightest. I hope that Ages is wrong and that Hermione doesn't ever take the rapist as a mate.

I love Darius!! His pep talk to Hermione was very kind and informative. I confess that with the last chapter, I was beginning to be turned off by how Hermione did seem to be treated like a piece of meat, so I hope that this means that in the future, she will be treated with more respect.

Ah, Darius is very sweet. He should get somebody (maybe Neville or Draco?) and feel happy. And yay for Hermione having someone to talk to!

And that was definitely NOT what I was expecting Tara to be like. Although truthfully I shouldn't form an opinion on her right after something like that happened. I did think though Hermione was getting out of line when Roland came back and she just jumped him. Roland is an ass, but Hermione didn't give him a chance to react to Tara. It sucks that every time after Hermione is really happy, something blows up and she ends up getting told off and to stop listening to her human mind. X_X

I am interested in seeing more of what Tara is like in the future...

And I am still wondering what Neville and Draco are up to in here. XD I'm sure Neville isn't having that easy a time adjusting either, even if he isn't having as big a problem with his human mind.

Yay for the update(s)! :)

That shows another face of Hermione......... The kind and caring............ Confused, hey in the world I can say that every body is confused........ LOL

awesome story plz update it soon

girl needs to learn when to shut up

So its been a long time since I've been able to read and review. This story is developing along nicely. I sometimes I think that I love the interaction between the members of the clan and the pack more than I like the smut scenes. Don't get me wrong, those are awesome too. Good job done. You always make me have to cut on the fan after I read them, but I like the plain interaction between the wolves more. I think because you're so detailed and the descriptions of their relationships are so rich, that I am in love with a lot of your characters. I'm interested to see where Darius comes in again, I love his cameo in this chapter. I'm hoping for redemption from Calan in Hermione's eyes. And from your description, I would love to fuck the shit out of Toric (pardon my vulgarity!). LMAO. Great update and I can't wait to see what Tara has done that she has to be thrown into the head alpha's quarters. I think this will also be a turning point in the relationship between Tara and Hermione. I can't wait to read what you have planned!