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by grugster

person GuiltyPleasure
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, but I felt that in this one we didn't get to learn enough about the new characters.
person Mimander
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome!! I'm loving it!!! please update soon!
person Ella
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
UGH!!!!! PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!!!!
person Mira
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter) loved the promise of Hermione becoming a queen))
But what about Neville and Draco? when are they coming back into the story?)
person rayhansd
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love Love LOVE this story! The entire structure of werewolf community is very well thought over but there isn't so much plot that it distracts for the wonderfully smutty sex. My only problem is just how much Hermione is out of character. Could we see the more intelligent side of Hermione now that she's pretty comfrotable in the clan?
Please keep writing! I'm always checking for your speedy updates :)
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like that Hermoine and Tara are now friends. Now maybe Tara can teach Hermoine how to let her wolf side control her more.

It is good to have a friend to talk to who also still has to many of those 'pesky human' thoughts.

I can see how 'the pup' can help make changes in the clan. Her comments to Ages are evidence of that.

But the conversations with Darius was great. His comment for her to view her mates as her 'harem boys' and that 'they' are the whores for her was...PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!

More please...with lots of sex too!?!?!!?!?!
person sbrande
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!

Thanks for the newest chapter.

Love Sonia :)
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! I was wondering when Tara was going to make
an entrance. And it was no problem at all. I was just a little
confused. I really cant wait for Neville and Draco make another
entrance in the story.
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was awesome! so great to meet Tara and Darius. I hope Hermione and Tara can be pals. It was nice seeing a little sweet moment between Tara and Roland. Hermione is such a bad girl...she is seriously going to get it one of these days. :) Nice that she found a friend in Darius. As always, can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i love the interaction between Hermione and Tara i am glad they have talk to each other now. Darus and Hermione being friends and able to talk to each other is great too. I can't wait for the next chapter =)