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this is really really good i was waiting for Hermoine and Roland to get together and they finally have! Thank You!

Okay so here I am again waiting for the next chapter cause im so, excited to see what happens next, I cant WAIT to see what happens with Hermione and Roland. Update soon pleaseee pretty please.

Roland! WOW That would be interesting. Darius, he is very sweet! Keep them coming this is so much fun.

I'm glad Hermione is warming up to Roland, and it was great to learn more about the Splinters and how they "level up." But I wish this chapter had more detail. Like what does Janto look like? How does Tara know Thalien so well? I feel like the chapter was cut off at the end there too, it just ended so abruptly. And I was confused about one part - were Toric and Radgar in the room watching, or was Hermione just remembering them? AS ALWAYS I'm looking forward to reading more, I just love this story! Are we going to learn more about what Roland meant about Darius and him acting like Hermione's sire? What does that mean?

I am finding it difficult to like Roland I still hate him so much. I hate how he seems to be so unchanged by Hermione while the others are. Other wise, I am horribly in love with this story.

YAY!! I love this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next

yay! some story line with our smut... No that isn't a dig and so far you've got the balance between pretty good. It's just that some times i'm not in the mood for smut so i skip to the next story line bit... and this isn't a stab a your smut skills, which are awesome, it's just some times I'm not in the mood. *shrugs
Thats just how i feel today

Interesting chapter! Nice to see Hermione accepting her wolf!!
Wonder what's the deal with her and Radar!!
Update soon!!

And I think people are just lazy with there updates!!
Because as a writer you should know - people love to criticise!!
And this story is still fantastic!

I liked the talk between Hermione and Tara it was nice to see them friendly with one another. I wish there was more of the Hermione Roland action but i guess i have to wait until next chapter for that lol it is so hard to wait, your chapters are always so good!!!!!

I can't yet decide whether I'm okay with the idea of Hermione and Roland together. I think you can pull it off, and I like the direction you have started to head with their relationship.