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by grugster

schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As always, I love every new chapter...no matter how long I have to wait in between!!!

I love that Hermoine does not always pick who others would expect.

I am glad that Tara and Hermoine have at least come to understand each other. And even Roland is not so bad.

Will Hermoine be required to bed each of the warriors for her clan, as Tara does?

I patiently await your next chapter.
person circe266
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, that was yummy! I like that Hermione is most drawn to the men that treat her sweetly.

Thanks for the new chapter.
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
things definately are getting more interesting with every passing chapter!! Brill!
person fafa
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hi

i recently discoverd yout story. it's absolutely brilliant!
i can't wait to read more of it.
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter was deffinatly worth the wait, i am in love with Janto he is so cute and this whole new side of Roland is really interesting! i can't wait to see Fenrir's reaction to all this!!
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Totally have a crush on Janto now. Fantastic chapter and happy to see her getting along with Roland, too! I'm still curious about the "sire" thing and that that exactly means. Looking forward to reading more, as always!
person Rhodella
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to read more of this. I started at about 10 last night, and could hardly stop reading it to sleep or eat :P.
I really like the story and of course, the smut.
Also the ideas in this are really interesting to me, especially with the werewolf hierarchy and that everyone is split up by their dominating or submissive sides, as well as the characters, and their responses to everything that's happening around them.
Like, I said, I cant wait to read more. Also, if your beta reader finds herself unable to continue, I would be more than happy to beta read for you instead.
Also, is the rest of the fic going to be solely based in the werewolf "house" and its grounds, or are there going to be any scenes in the future where they leave, to visit other packs, or visit somewhere in the wizarding community for any reason? It would be interesting to see, in my opinion.
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was worst wild! Amazing and hot hot hot! Hey you keep them coming at your pace. We wait for them. Take care!
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Can't wait to see more interaction between Hermione and Roland. Please, update soon!
person roze
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story. I never really like slash but you made me like it. I was wondering if she will get pregnant cause she is different then regular subs it would be nice to see Remus in the story as a lone wolf and try to kidnap hermonie but it's your story your writing is amazing pleas keep them coming I can't wait till the next update