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for Just Submit 2

by grugster

person Anon
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWW poor Hermione she was so confused, i love the fact that she didn't even know that she had claimed two more mates!!!! Can't wait for some Fenrir and Hermione action in the next chapter =)
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love how Hermoine tried to get out of multiple punishments!!!! The comment by the eldest was priceless.

Hermoine does learn quickly how to control her mates when she must. Her distraction of Fenrin was very HOT!!!

More, please!
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I really love this story!!!
person kmjb
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is an awsome story... please continue!!!! will Darius become one of her mates?
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeay!!! More fenrir! And a little more of the story and what the hell hermione is unfolds!! Loved it!! The elders are great! You always make them so funny! Again.... Thanks for more fenrir! He's not un stories enough!
person reireii
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading Just Submit 1 & 2....all the scenes are so HOT and just love how the characters are turning out. Your an awesome author! :) Please please update again soon!
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update as usual, and I am so intrigued by all these new characters. Sex with Roland did not seem that bad. I do think that Hermione will go for an another round with him if her reactions were a good indication. This Janto wolf seems very playful and fun. I'm thinking that Hermione has marked him as one of her regular mates now, which means that we will be seeing a lot more of him. Very excited. Great update and I can't wait to read more.
person sbrande
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading.

Love Sonia :)
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy your stories. Hope you and your beta's lives improve swiftly.
person GuiltyPleasure
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so hot. I can hardly wait for it to be uploaded for each new chapter. Thank you for the wonderful story.