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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since part 1. I find your characterization to be very flushed out and your story flows very smoothly.I would read anything you write, just because you are awesome.
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, i loved the Hermione and Fenrir heart to heart during sex!! sooo looking forward to find out what she is going to do with Igor and how she is going to get into Darius' good graces =)
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a temper-tantrum Hermione...priceless!!!!
Oh, the scene with Fenrir was HOT. Especially with the shackles against the wall!!!
Ages is very clever. Take his hot and wet pup against the wall and have the other clan's leaders watch. I bet that made a BIG *wink* impression!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh, the scene with Fenrir was HOT. Especially with the shackles against the wall!!!
Ages is very clever. Take his hot and wet pup against the wall and have the other clan's leaders watch. I bet that made a BIG *wink* impression!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cute I liked it, look forward to next chapter.
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter babe.
Thanks.
Love Sonia :)
Thanks.
Love Sonia :)
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Just wanted to say you're very talented and this story is very interesting.
Nice job
Just wanted to say you're very talented and this story is very interesting.
Nice job
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the plotty chapters just as much as the smutty ones! This was interesting, to learn more about how the mate system works. So the sire, Darius, he is like her guardian of sorts? I do enjoy when the Elders drop by to school the dominants a bit. :) I hope the next chapter includes some Hermione/Fenrir smut, it's been a while since we've seen those two together. ! ! As always, great job & keep up the good work!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love when you involve the Elders in the situation. Poor Fenrir he doesn't know that he got his hands full with Hermione.......... LOL
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn it just when I thought some smut at the end. lol.
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Though of course I love the lemony chapters, I also enjoy these chapters where we learn more about how the pack works, and how Hermione fits in. You did a great job of showing each of her mate's diverse personalities with how you wrote their comments and actions: snarky Severus, slightly insecure Toric, supportive and tough Darius, etc. (I would love more interactions with the always yummy Yorik.)
God, Fenrir is such a drama queen! I look forward to reading about how he 'reclaims his #1 spot' with his pup. LOL
God, Fenrir is such a drama queen! I look forward to reading about how he 'reclaims his #1 spot' with his pup. LOL