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by grugster

person circe266
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved every bit of this chapter: the hot (and sweet) encounter with sexy Igor, Hermione's attempts to sway the various dominants, and the dynamic between Severus and Ages. Aside from the yummy lemon, I liked the funny byplay with Dorothea most of all. Great character.

How do all the dominants know about her little plan? Can they ALL read her mind?? How frustrating for her, the former know-it-all, that everyone else seems to know and sense everything, and she often has no clue what's going on. It's lucky for her that they are so crazy about her (and her out of control pheromones).

I'm sorry that you aren't getting all the reviews you are hoping for. Does it help to know that I am a superfan? I get a thrill every time I see a new chapter posted. Keep up the good work!
person kadajclone
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this fic, will there be any more moments where hermione thinks back to her life before becoming a werewolf?
person CharlotteBlack
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and have been following it for a long time. I havent reviewed though because I havent really had anything much to say other than I want more! Im glad the story has steered more towards hermiones story line and away from neville as I prefer that storyline. However I feel like you hold out on posting chapters because of lack of reviews which really annoys me. I wish posts were more regular. Even if its just one a week. You have said before that you have already written well ahead.
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this playful side of the story! Which reminds me. Maybe the lack of response is that we have to check on the site to be aware of the updates. Can you make a list of emails or something to let us know when an update is on? Is only a suggestion.
person katiekrm
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dorothea is hilarious! I can't wait to see Neville and Draco take a stand.
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg! What a chapter! I love when the elders appear, sooo funny!!
person Katie
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I absolutely love Dorothea! She's fuckin priceless!
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another very nice chapter. I cant wait for the next.
person QuintiliVare
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*squeels* oh how I love the Eldest! and Severus' antics are so amusing. :) Whatever wonderful muse you have, I hope it stays with you! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Jessica
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it, I just wished there was another chapter to read. I haven't been able to read for about two weeks and out off all the stories I read this one was the only one on my mind, I can't wait for the next chapter. your the best.