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by grugster

schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uhoh! Hope Hermione isn't going to do something dumb! Still loving your story, thank you for sharing your hard work with us.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, So I understand that you have a life and what not!! But you can not leave us on such a cliffy! What is she going to do?!
Loved this chapter - don't know why but I really dislike Severus in this story and usually he is one of my favourites! (I'm not bothered by this and I don't mean it as a negitive towards your story!) Loved that ages showed him his place... He's going to have to do that to Hermione isn't he... Poor girl, with her mind - how isnt she a dominant...
Love this story!!
Cant wait for the next update!! :)
person abm
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please put the next chapter up ASAP! Love you story, love your writing.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!!!!! Why are all the best writers keep leaving me
with clifthanger?!?! Ugh! I'll just have to wait for the next chapter
I guess. But I can handle it. Just please for the love for all thats
is good, please update as soon as possible! I feel I may die if I
dont find out what is going to happen!
person katiekrm
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion, they weren't fighting yet. I'm rooting for Hermione. If she does get punished, I so hope she punishes them in return. No sex! I really wanted to see Draco and Neville stand up to the bullies and refuse them sex. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, she was only scared for him. She's still got some major trust issues going on there. Otherwise she'd know that he was unlikely to be truely hurt. I hope she doesn't catch to much hell for this cause since she was truely concerned. she doesn't seem happy at all with the status quo either. Sub doesn't mean door mat and she's a pup, not just a sub.
In a way it's a pity ron and harry were killed off. They'd've made interesting wolves.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Who's pestering you? That's so unfair. people need to learn that writers have their own lives to and to just appriciate what we are given, when we are given it... poo, now i sound like a sub. :P
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh i am on the edge of my seat, i want to know what Hermione's plan is!!!! awesome chapter, i loved the interplay between the head alpha and head beta =)
person IdrilLuinwe
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... Hermione is in big trouble now! Thank-you for updating when you can; I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! <3
person rayhansd
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again, I love this story! Fenrir and Hermione's interaction is my favorite. Thank you for updating!
I feel like this Hermione is pretty bratty and not as intelligent as we all like but I'm waiting to see how you user her in the next chapter.