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Ah, such a young inexperianced, but passionate, pup. What is the clan to do? Espcially the head beta, who is also one of her mates.

This next chapter should prove very interesting, enlightening, and painful (for the pup, that is).

Can't wait.

Hey i loveeee ur story!!!
I think it wuld b really cool if u had gotten hermione to escape into the forest where she gets lost and could perhaps run into a few death eaters and who beta then fenrir to save her=]
Plzzzz keep writin!!

i cant wait till the next chapter. :) just one quick question though. ive been wondering this for a while. will bill or remus be in the story at any point?

I had a question on the sale of subs... a few actually. if subs are valuable, why sell them? is it punishment? They;re not clicking with the pack? The pack has to many (though I was pretty sure you said they weren't that common or is that just super subs)? What? And Why?

Secondly, I'd very much like to borrow your world for a bit. Not the characters so much, just the general set up and overview. I'd like to cross it over with some of my originals. I've got two or three scenarios in my head as I type.
But I'm not going to do a thing without your permission.
My email is ckestra@hotmail.com so pls contact me if you would. Thanks.

okay, Dorothea is awesome and it's hilarious how she picks on Severus. If he's not accepting his wolf, then I guess he needs to be shown his place. Why can't Hermione get that? I'm interested in what her devious plan is, although I'm pretty sure she's just going to end up with a blistering spanking for her trouble.

I patiently waited as I know this isn't your total life focus but OMG where you left chapter 27 I don't think I can stand waiting. Poor Severus. It's hard to remember that he's a fairly new werewolf also and is probably still having issues adapting. Thanks for a great story.

I still like Dorothea. It hasn't mattered to me how long it takes before chapters are posted. I'm just grateful that you're writing this sequel. Love your stories. Thank you for finding the time to write what you have done. I must admit I do check frequently to see if you've updated but the suspense is good for me.

Absolutely great chapter. I'm dying to find ut what Hermione plans!
I hope you'll post a new one soon! :)

Oooh, it makes me so happy to see a new chapter!

As always, I really like the way you write the pack dynamic. I don't even mind Dorothea instigating a little Severus/Ages action, though I wish we would also gotten some Hermione/Yorik too.

However, it does bother me that it looks like Hermione is about to be punished yet again simply for having her own mind and behaving in a way that is natural for someone who didn't grow up as a wolf, especially given that it doesn't seem like anyone has really bothered to give her the full scoop on what is OK/not OK and what is expected of her. For me, it is starting to go a too far beyond the sexy dom/sub dynamic -- I don't like how unfair it is, and it makes me like the dominant characters a little less each time it happens. I hope for the sake of the character that Hermione is finally able to "win" this time.

I'll be waiting patiently (and eagerly!) for your next update.

Oh please do update soon! I am so eager that I read the whole thing all over again! I can't wait for Janto and Torik to get together, I bet they would be halarious!! That and Hermione needs an excuse to cuddle with cute Janto, and Torik loves to cuddle! I'm also quite eager to see what ranks Fenrir gives her mates! *snicker* I get the feeling that he has an interesting sense of strength, and since he never has quite fallowed the rules, I can see at least one amusing rank happening.