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by grugster

schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait until Hermione gets to know her wolf, but I imagine that won't be for awhile. I totally understand the dominance thing though and am really enjoying her struggles!
person Bbajshdkwksbs
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Much too short! Please update soon!!
person GuiltyPleasure
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I am so excited for each new chapter. I'm interested to see how all of the mates react to Hermione's escape attempt.
person thestralhorse
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I my goodness!!!!!!! This chapter is so good, I feel so bad for Hermione and all her mates they are just confusing each other more and more which made it a totally perfect chapter and i can't wait for more!!!
person colao
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's like slowing down to check out a car accident...I'm curious to see what happens next...
person katiekrm
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I still don't want Hermione to be too badly punished. I just wish they would try harder to see things from her point of view. I do love this fic, though, and it was killing me waiting for this chapter. What she did, she did out of love and concern for Severus. And let's face it, her mates suck at communication. She still doesn't understand their ways.
person abm
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Thank you!
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh you silly puppy. 1 step forward, 4 steps back. As plans go that was pretty rubbish, sweety. Never plan when you're angry. Now, you'll be more restricted than ever.

Also, I didn't hear back from you. may I use your world?
person lele
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story its one of the best iv ever seen I cant wait till your next chapter this is one of few stories that I have the patients and intrest to read thanks alot and keep up the awesome writing. :)
person secretq quill
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please give hermione some power. i understand the positions when they have sex, but this is hermione! she would stand up for what she believes is right, and how in the world could she be happy if shes going to be bullied into silence all the time!?