rate_review Reviews

ok, so the punishment wasnt toooo bad, and hermione really seems to be comming to terms with been a warewolf!
Great chapter!

I read this story on a whim, well let me backtrack a bit, I read part one on a whim and I liked it. The sequel is okay but there is entirely to much sex and not enough substance. I really like the world you created, it's interesting. I'm always happy when the only warning is 'drama' or plot because I actually feel as if the story is moving. I think you need to take the angst further than one chapter, some of those chapters read more like a plot devices than a true contributions to the plot, which I'm still trying to figure out. This story is seriously in want of angst, something that the original had. I sometimes think you should have put PWP in the writing because there is more porn than plot.

I know my review may come of harsh, but that's only because I believe this story has the potential to be so much more than sex, it would be nice if you mixed it up more.

Great chapter. Interesting how her "wolf" is reacting.

Great chapter. I like that fact that Hermione is struggling with her wolf, it makes it more plausible.

Keep up the great work.

Love Sonia :)

This is one of my most anticipated updates every week. I don't really know what to say about this chapter. I'm one of the ones who doesn't want her to be quite so submissive. They're not giving her anything to do that she loves. They punish her when she's still learning. I kind of wanted her to hate Ages after her punishment and ask him to leave her alone. And like she said in her head, they haven't provided her with winter clothes. I'd like to see Hermione not be happy with them and refuse them affections. That being said, I am looking forward to the next chapter.

mmm i really don't know what to say after reading this chapter. A part of me wants to stop reading, i understand she is a sub but even them have a backbone , they way she is being treated is like a child . None of them should get any action , specially Ages , i mean maybe this way they will learn that she isn't like other subs and give her space to be herself maybe this will lead to a better situation for everyone. i have been reading since the 1st one but never wrote a review , today's chapter rubbed me the wrong way . will be giving one more chapter a try before making my mind i would hate to stop reading but you have taken what makes Hermione well Hermione i understand OOC , but this is like reading a completely different character. Love your writing and hope to read more of your stories in the future.

As always, I love it! Maybe this will help Hermione get more into the groove of being submissive.

poor Hermione she is so sad, but it is an awesome chapter!! All the interaction with the mates was great, thank you so much for posting it made my day and i can't wait for the next chapter =)

cant blame her. i'd be wanting to get away from all those jerks too. one or two "bosses" are bad enough but she got bunches.

I love this story, I just have a hard time thinking of Hermione as so submissive and so unlike the powerful woman she is. I can almost see her giving up and trying suicide like she thought of in the last chapter. But I can't wait to see where you are taking this