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I love what you write and how you've written these stories. Thank you for writing them.

Please forget about all your negative reviewers. I love your story and look forward to your post! I cant wait to see who is the one opening the door. Please post soon, this last wait was dreadful!

Is this story finished now? :(

Update soon please

Awesome story, I would like to see another full moon, when Hermoine acts normal again ;)

This was another very interesting chapter. It has to be so difficult for Hermione to know when to trust her gut feelings and when to hold back.

I thought of something else to add. I think part of the reason I was so disappointed that Hermione was punished so badly, for things that I feel are more her learning the werewolf culture and understandably being an emotional wreck, is that I was expecting her to get back some of her own power by getting Neville and Draco to stand up for themselves and test their rights in the pack, which I was greatly looking foward to. Instead of that, it's proven yet again how little power she has. I also feel like Severus is violating her privacy with this constant mind reading. I don't think her mates are doing that great of a job at explaining the pack culture, danger, and rules to her and tending to her emotional needs. Give the bookworm some books already! I so wish she'd reject Ages after this. That being said, I'm dying to know what happens next. Dying! This world you've created is very interesting.

I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

It seems that not thinking IS Hermione problem so I don't know why they keep telling her she is thinking too much. All she does is react on an emotional level. No one has sat her down & said here are the werewolves rules/laws and what we expect or here's some books for you to study. She is not reasoning or researching or discussing anything. It's like she is mentally deficeint now. Where is our bossy swot who literally drug 3 boys through classes and set revision schedules? There have been no thoughts of grief for her friends & parents. No thoughts of what is happening in the wizarding/muggle world and what Voldy is doing. She hasn't asked one coherent question or made one coherent explanation of her worries or thoughts. She's just been going from sex scene to punishment scene & back to sex scene. I do like your writing style and this version of werewolves that you have created is fasinating, but I'm getting bored and frustrated. If there's more going on, then I feel the reader needs to be in on that somewhat, even if Hermione isn't. I accept that Fenrir is nothing like canon and you have developed some truly interesting original characters, but if Hermione isn't going to be at least somewhat like our Hermione, you might have as well made her an OC which may have been better because I wouldn't be having expectations. I make these statements respectfully and with the understanding that you certainly have the right to write your story as you see fit. I will still be reading. Thank you.

men are idiots. They dont even bother to findout why she did what she did so they can prevent it from happening again. Ah well