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I ablsolutly enjoy this story just the way you write it....my feeling on those who want to tell you how to write your story is that they should write their own then...it's one thing for someone to give an idea but to tell you how they think it should be isn't right...it's your story and you are correct about not apoligizing for what you write, if they don't like it then they shouldn't read it...i have enjoyed it and was so excited to see that there had been an update after I had been out of town for a couple of days....i do hope you continue posting this story and finish it because I think what you are writing is a fresh idea with an original plot that has so much potential...i will say I was hoping for a scene between her and Severus to talk about things and make it ok between them but again just my idea....great writing and I can't wait for another chapter!!! Keep writing and don't let the nay sayers get to you because what you write is yours not anyone elses!!

I love this chapter it is so cute with all the subs waking up together and then Hermione and Roland with Janto there was great!! i am so glad you posted i was getting worried that you had been put off writing the story but honestly i think that a lot of the people that have problems with how the story is going dont really understand the werewolf thinking and following of their instincts aspect of the plot. But be assured that i am totally in love with your story and I am always looking forward to the next chapter =)

I'm so so so glad you updated. Please dont stop writing this story. :D

hello,

I hope you get this, it's so hard to for me to review @ aff .net that i usually don't bother. however, you seemed like you needed someone to be nice. i really like this story and the first one. I don't like all the little parts, but i like the story and the parts i don't like fit and fit well, it's just i have to get over hermione not being human and therefore not reacting like a human would. i hope you continue to post and continue to ignore flammers or negative nacies. they're welcome to write their stories, but many do not, and of those that do, many are poor writers. you're a good writer and you're creative, so keep on keepin on.
jillian

I'm sorry people are rubbishing you. I mean, Mio did something stupid and was punished for it. Sure it was bound to upset people but I'm sorry they're taking it out on you. Please do keep publishing this as there are people who enjoy it... and if they don't like where the story is at, they should just leave it for a few chappies so the story can develop more.
It seems mio has finally starting to settle in and I'm glad she pumped the other subs up a bit. If they're right, it's a privalige to have them, not a right and the doms have it in their head that it's a right. I'm glad the boys stood uup for themselves.
Poor mio, even heat shoulden't send the bloke off his rocker like that. And since when is a fear scented no a come on. what an idiot.

oooooooooooooh, hey, thankks! I'll start posting just as soon as I figure out what to classify it under. Does it count as a crossover if you're just borrowing the world and not the ccharacters? :\

Thanks for the new chapter. I always look forward to new chapters from you. :)

I love this story! I hadn't seen an update from you in a while, and I thought the worse. I'm glad that you're back and updating again. I love how you're going about the story. You definately keep me guessing in what the characters will do next. I'm confident in your writing ability and can't wait for your next chapter, so keep of the GREAT work : )

This was great! I'm sorry you've been getting rude people telling you that you should change your story...I think it's perfect just the way it is. Everything that happens to Hermione is thoroughly explained and if people don't like that she is being punished for breaking the rules then they shouldn't read a story in which she is described as a *submissive*. That's what subs have to do: FOLLOW RULES! Anyway I love your story and I hope you keep posting, and ignore the stupid rude people who are criticizing your storytelling. I loved this last chapter and I can't wait to see what's up with Castor...why would he not obey Igor? I'm intrigued.

I've been reading stories here for 3 years now and this is the first review I've every written. I think your story is wonderful, you are truly bringing your characters to life. Please ignore the people who are complaining, if they don't like they way your story is unfolding they should go write their own and not try to make you change yours. I really hope you continue the story because I can't wait to hear where it goes!