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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! i wouldn't want you to change a thing! keep it up 'cause i'm dying to know what happens next!!
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, at times even a great story, and pretty damn hot, too; but that's because you wrote it the way you wanted. Don't listen to destructive criticism. Stick with what you've started, and bring it home as you imagined. It's easy to be a critic, especially a dull and unimaginative one. It's a whole lot harder to be a writer. I know, I've tried, and though I haven't yet produced anything that I would be comfortable puttng out there, I am very much aware of how much work is involved in even getting started. If there are folks here who don't like what you do, suggest that they try to write even one chapter of their own story, and then come back and continue their cricism. I doubt many of them will be heard from again. All the best,
Gordissimo
Gordissimo
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay so i beg you please please please please please please please PLEASE!!! continue this it is amazing and wonderful and i loves it so much! i just finished rereading the first one and this one I am so happy you added another chapter!.
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dont let the negative reviews get to ya hun. I think you are doing an amazing job and can't wait for your new chapters! Keep up the great work!
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. You would have thought that someone would have explained it all to her in advance. And they should have known, since she was almost due to be in heat, that she needed her underwear. Also, they should have put more guards on her for the same reason. It is a wonder she does not turn inside all of the time with each new experience being as bad or worse than the last...at the very least, completely different from anything she has experienced. Very interesting. p
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to those that are giving you negative feedback and want you to change things. I love your story and I love the directions that you are taking it. I always look forward to more. Thank you for writing!
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh great chapter, I can't wait to see who is going to open the door. And poor Hermione, it just seems that she can't catch a break from those horny dominants. Wait, is that really a bad thing tho? LOL As far as negative reviews go, excuse my language, but fuck them! I don't even know what any of them can complain about. It is not them writing this wonderful creative piece, it is you. I know that I do not often review, but please know that from now on I shall always review. If that is what it takes to keep this wonderful story going, I will keep reviewing. This story is awesome. The way you describe the relationships between the dominants and the subs, as well as the relationship between Hermione and the Eldest and Dominants is so rich. I feel very connected to many of these characters. I think this story is awesome, and I beg you to continue writing. I am in love and I will surely be sad if you decide to stop.
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story since part 1 and I've liked it so much. Its one of the few I look forward to. Everything about it is great and you don't need to change it or adapt it for anyone. Sometimes that's the problem with authors that write for reviews; they get lost and discouraged trying to do what everyone wants.
Write your story the way you want. Write it for yourself. If we review fine, if we don't fine!; and don't even bother with the flames or the requests. This is not a democracy, this is YOUR STORY.
So there, I said my piece. Now I shall await for your next... ;)
Write your story the way you want. Write it for yourself. If we review fine, if we don't fine!; and don't even bother with the flames or the requests. This is not a democracy, this is YOUR STORY.
So there, I said my piece. Now I shall await for your next... ;)
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay first of all, I absolutely love this story. So whoever is sending you mean reviews can just go jump off a cliff! I have been reading this since you started posting it and if you don't finish it I will be super sad. So keep on trucking because I cannot wait to see what happens next! :))))))
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AgainandAgain~
I think you should continue to post your story. I truly believe it is one of the best I have read. There is not just a lot of sex in it, there is a plot and I at least, can see how hard you have worked on this fic. As far as flames go, my thoughts are that they are jealous of your talent. Don't let them get you down and keep up the excellent writing that you have been giving us!! I hope that you keep posting, as I check all the time for updates and it would be a shame not to be able to read the end of this story.
I think you should continue to post your story. I truly believe it is one of the best I have read. There is not just a lot of sex in it, there is a plot and I at least, can see how hard you have worked on this fic. As far as flames go, my thoughts are that they are jealous of your talent. Don't let them get you down and keep up the excellent writing that you have been giving us!! I hope that you keep posting, as I check all the time for updates and it would be a shame not to be able to read the end of this story.