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for Just Submit 2

by grugster

person chameleon
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love that you finally updated. I have waited patiently for weeks wondering if you had quit writing. I hope that you finish the story however, for I do LOVE it. while i wish Hermoine had more of her old spunk and brains again and would actually think/research before she just does things, it is your story to write how you wish to write. and no one else has any say it how it proceeds. So sufficed to say I love your story and the world you created, and please keep writing.
person carebear
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!!!! how could you stop there. please update soon so I know what happens next!!! I love this story and can't wait for more!
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't stop posting!!! I was having such a stressful week and was thinking to myself "you know what would be the best thing ever if Just Submit 2 would be updated" and guess what...you UPDATED :) Seriously though I look forward to every chapter of this story and it really is a bright spot in my week/month when you update. Ignore all the flames and hatred, just pay attention to those of us who are in LOVE with your story. Even though I love some smut (I mean really who doesn't?), I've loved these past two/three chapters, I feel like it's gone deeper into the feelings that Hermione has for the pack and how she's dealing with them/beginning to accept them. Let them haters hate they don't know what they're missing.
I do have two questions though and I hope they don't make me sound dumb. As far as subs go, how many types are there? Because we have super subs, who have sex with all the clan, and we have pups, who have a select number of subs. But what type of sub is Miller's wife? Are there just regular subs who just mate with one person?
Also, what is efflux? Is that the beginning of her period? Sorry I look on wiki and didn't find anything, so I was just wondering. Wow that was more than two quesitons, sorry about that. But, I can't wait for the next chapter and hate that you left it as a cliffe :( PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't stop posting, it would take away one of the things I look forward to the most :)
person QuintiliVare
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
noooo! not a cliff hanger!!! But I'm so glad for the update!!! I just now noticed that I love Draco's attitude. (I know he was barely in this chapter, but still!) He's such a complete horndog, but in a funny cocky kinda way. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person sbrande
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter.

Question. Who are you writing this for? If the answer is yourself, then I wouldn't worry about the negative feedback you are receiving. You can't please everyone, so don't even bother trying. This story is yours, nobody elses, so just stay true to yourself and don't worry about anyone elses option. I know it is easier said then done, but try. I would be really upset if you just left me hanging here.

Love this story, keep up the great work.

Love Sonia :)
person breakingfaith
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I like where you are taking it so far. You should not have to change what you write, nor say your sorry for writing something because someone does not like what they are reading. You should write for yourself, and were you want to take the story. Keep up the awsome work, and I hope to see a lot more in the future. :)
person Kelea
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop writing this story!!! Its amazing and you are and amazing writer. This is the story I look most forward to an update from. I LOVE IT!!
person dark_of_night
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about the trouble you've had with reviewers. I enjoy reading your story and even if some of your chapters don't go the way I want/exppect, I always look forward to reading the next chapter that you post. Please keep up the good work and keep posting the story, some of us (like me) really do support you.
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so annoyed that you have been getting negative reviews!! How dare anyone do that!! I look forward to this story everytime a new chapter comes up!! I love it! So what if there are a few mistakes; LEAVE IT!! Seriously love your writing and your stories don't let anyone put you down.
person kitty08
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wooow I love the story and cant beleave why anybody should have something against it. You are right! This is your story and you should write it as you like. You are not writing it for someone else only for youself, so everything should stay your decision. If somebody doent like it, they shouldnt read it. But back to the story I love the new chapter and hate cliffys so please, please update soon!!!