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by grugster

person pooh
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was so much fun. Reminds me of a crisco party in college! nuf said!
person Rawr
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your story but I'm really starting to get very mad because you refuse to finish the story who cares about a beta please either say it's over or finish it. Because this is getting really old.
person angeles
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update.... Please keep them coming.... Also could you please don't let Draco and Neville be punished to hard.... I like those guys too much! LOL
person SJ
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
loving the story so far....but as im waiting for more chapters im re-reading the story and im noticing that there isnt really a lot of female influence in the story other than the subs, the mothers mentioned in passing, and that one grouping with draco n a female dominant (i think she was at least) gave him a bj. also you mention a lot how its the subs choice and they can say no, but we have only seen that happen once and it was neville....what about hermione? i think it would be interesting to see how the females wolves take to the new subs, hermione especially, and to actually see some choice from the subs on their partners. how does that work? do the doms give up easily? how long will a dom be persistent until he or she knows to give up? and why is it only the male doms that take pleasure from the subs?


hahaha yeah thats a lot but meh if i didnt like the story i wouldnt care, and then i wouldnt read it. so this just shows how much i care and love the story.

take care!
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it!!
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
iff love the story but i will like to know if you hace the ID of it? and yours to please.! i would like to have you on my favorites
person Dharma
schedule December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I suck at reviews, but I'm really enjoying this story. I hope the next chapter will be soon.
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, it's nice to see you updating this story =D ha! Like the three of them could get away with anything not likely.
person thestralhorse
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY I am so excited :) thank you for the update I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see Fenrir's reaction!
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update again!! I love this story! I have read and reread it multiple times (: you always leave me craving for more