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for Just Submit 2

by grugster

schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another good chappie. I'm not sure where this story is going, but I certainly am in for the long haul!
person Samibear
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I love ur just submit stories. As soon as I finished the 1st I was like, More!! Lol. Don't change a thing about them. ^_^
person coopershawk
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, had me on tender hooks while Hermione was in the toilet. I'm wondering what happens to the mated female submissive. Are these submissives kept locked away by their mates to keep them safe?
person FalonIce
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,

Just wanted you to know that your story is great. I have been reading it since the first Just Submit. You are a truly gifted writer
:)
person Citten
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay i am so sorry i have not reviewed before now!!! sweety i am so sorry people are giving you crap! hey i know just be like jk and tell them to 'bugger off' in your own way of course. cause people gave her shit too when she started writing and were tell her not to make them so 'realistic' in people dying and the hard things that they had to go through. but she didn't listen she told them she was going to write about what see wanted and those who did not like what was happening to just not read them anymore. so those who don't like your story just delete them and writr what YOU want and write what you had planned cause i love the story and i SO want to read what YOU have coming out of your head i love the story!!!! :) i really do hope that you will continue to post this story and if nothing else try other websites that cater to writers, i know lot of poeple will find it interesting and lot of fun. if you dont and keep write and dont post it here i would love to still read it so let me know if you aren't going to post so we can email each other at least. but please consider still posting i so love what you have written and i will try to be better find the time to write a review i see a chapter!! beside i reread your story when ever i find the time inbetween postings and i cant WAIT to see what happens next!!!! :) HOPE TO READ FROM YOU SOON!!!!! :)
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading just submit 2 and i've also read the first one and I like it. I really hope you don't stop posting this story, I really want to know what happens. I like that Hermione isn't her usual self it makes your story interesting. I also really enjoy this whole new world of the wolf clan. The only thing I dislike are that the new chapters go by so fast when I read them. I wish they were longer.
Other than that I really really really lover your story and I hope you don't discontinue it.
person merryXgirl
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I for one am glad you are continueing this story. I keep checking my favorites to see if a new chapter was posted. And, yea! Today there was.

I like the way you have created a unique view into werewolf life, and the mind set of dominate/submissive life.

So...rock on with your bad self.
:-)
And post another chapter.
person Zafoyal
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope u keep posting, I check all the time to see if your story has been updated and am so happy when it has. I don't care what other people think, I love the direction that you're taking the store and if they don't like it they should just stop reading it
person Ash
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you continue this story! I love it, as is! I normally dot review bc I don't have an account and thought I couldn't... I'm always checking to see if you have updated! Great job!
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That chapter was definately worth the wait!!
It seems that Hermione is becoming more comfortable with her wolf...
And i really hope you dont stop posting - this story is amazing!!
Cant wait to find out whats going on!!
Loved it!