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by grugster

person Anon
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such an amazing story *sigh* please update soon =] ohh and please can there be more fenrir/ hermione action. Good job !
person ZuneLuv3r
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just began reading this series today and I am already finished reading all of the chapters for the first and second part of the series so far. I hope you update soon because I'm being to love this fan fiction very much. Could you have more Draco and Neville action in the next few chapters please I would greatly appreciate it.By the way please continue updating this story because I can't wait for what happens next.
Also one last thing is thing going to be a mpreg story or can only the female submissive get pregnant when they get old enough to bear kids?
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't always review, and I should work on that. But every new chapter you post I just read, read ,read until the end. Then i anxiously wait for a new chapter and the process starts over again. I really enjoy this new wolf clan you've created and your writing is very interesting. The way you've written Hermione's character is very different from what people think of her, but its a good different. Not every story can be where hermione is as she is in the books, thats the point of fanfiction and as everyone else has said if they have a problem they shouldn't flame you. Keep writing it the way you want to and don't let anybody else tell you what you should do because its your story.
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione she always in one way or the other get into trouble..... Which make the story really good.... LOL
person nitesfool
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good update.... I'm eager to read ur next update.
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter <3
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter as usual :) i felt a bit embarrassed for Hermione when they decided to um.... consume, her discharge. But it was great! I must request an update really soon because I have mono and am not allowed to leave my house.... :)
person loisa
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh please update soon! i love this story soo much
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can completely understand how Hermione feels. Sometimes I feel that they are just torturing her with their "wolfen" ways. Yeah, I know it's not a word, but you know what I mean! LMAO. Severus is being all protective is he? Does that mean he'll get some action in the next chapter. And I like Janto but where's Toric? I am a Toric Lover!Something about him just turns me on thru the computer. LOL.
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! Two updates in such a short amount of time! I'm excited! I'm loving how this story is going and I can't see why anyone wouldnt. If they dont like it, tell them to not read it. and certainly dont post crap about it. Your story is amazing and i love it. I check it often to see if you updated since i was on last. Please continue to update this story and write it. :)